For a POV you don't write all that often you have Theodore's voice down pat. Loved it! I especially like that you have Brian maintaining his ties to Pitts and the people in it in his own very brianesque way. It's great how you voiced Ted's ambivilent feelings towards the "great God Kinney". For the inner porn king in Ted the ending was the icing on the cake.
I'm going to be so sorry when you wrap everything up even though I could take or leave Justin. The saga is just that good.
I do love your writing and your ability to tell a story that draws one in. Unlike the nm 131 I do love Justin as much as Brian. Your scene setting is delightful as usual.
Thank you so much, I don't comment often since I got ill but always enjoy your tales and the wonderful illustrations.
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And my, Brian, you do reallize you own about half of the Liberty Avenue now?
You've thought of every thing, just, wow!
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Justin is right about Ramon! WHO IS THAT? Yowza. That's quite the hat trick you've given us: Ted, Ramon and MozzieHilly. Well done!
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This chapter just made me all verklempt!
Great chapter, Gael!
PS - where did you learn your Yiddush :-)
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I'm going to be so sorry when you wrap everything up even though I could take or leave Justin. The saga is just that good.
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Thank you so much, I don't comment often since I got ill but always enjoy your tales and the wonderful illustrations.
Love from 6frog
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