Comments | gaedhal: 253 Creekside Canyon II -- Part 5

gaedhal

253 Creekside Canyon II -- Part 5

Nov 14, 2006 06:17

I've revised the ending of this chapter to bring
closure to it -- the rest is obvious in light of
"The End of 'The Evil Stream.'"

No one expects the Spanish Inquisition.

( Part 5 )

ron, debbie, ted, loft, emmett, qaf, diner, creekside canyon, fanfiction, brian

Comments 39

damietta November 14 2006, 13:09:15 UTC

Oh, think of the frequent flyer miles!

That is quite the statement that Brian took Ron to the diner. He'd never admit it, but I think he wanted the inquisition from "friends and family".

I'll have to read the "Left Hand of Darkness".

gaedhal November 14 2006, 18:34:22 UTC

Like Debbie says: Brian would never bring a trick
to the diner. So what IS Ron? Something else.
Something much more.

This is Brian's way of announcing that he's in a new
relationship without having to say it -- or maybe
without him even knowing it himself!

lexa4227 November 14 2006, 16:01:56 UTC

Great chapter.

gaedhal November 15 2006, 05:26:31 UTC

I'm trying!

melime2 November 14 2006, 21:38:52 UTC

Brilliant, Brian and Ron are coming to Finland. Welcome boys !

I love this story and in this stream Brian and Ron are so good together. Excellent as always with your writing.

Mimmi from Finland.

gaedhal November 14 2006, 21:53:33 UTC

I thought that would be the perfect location for the
film -- especially in the winter!

(Note Brian in warm sweater)

blkandwhtcat November 19 2006, 03:46:52 UTC

Hey, I want to read about Ron and Brian having sex in the sauna and then rolling around in the snow! (Isn't that what you can do in Finland, or did I just donwload some inaccurate porn? lol!)

anonymous November 14 2006, 22:34:57 UTC

Thanks Gael for another ep so soon. B will need more than that sweater in Finland! All sounds like a fun travel guide for B. It will be up to him to keep up contact and make sure no one is leaving him behind. He won't be able to blame R who is stating up front what is going to happen. And they have just established overnight that they are an item although I would have liked to read more of their coming to terms with that. I hope B did not just fuck him instead of talking about how he felt. And B is making a statement taking R to diner otherwise why on earth would he do that??!! Lots of phone sex, meetings and farewells and B learning that not everyone walks away and trust is the name of the game. Scary for him. Alice

gaedhal November 15 2006, 05:28:48 UTC

I think Ron is making clear that going on a location
shoot is NOT "leaving" -- it's a business trip, literally.
It's also not open-ended. It's to make a film. Period.
That's what Brian needs to here -- not "It's only time"!

Fav Authors anonymous November 15 2006, 02:45:21 UTC

Just when I think I can't love you more you throw in a reference to Ursula leGuin, she was one of the first fantasy/scifi authors I read and now have my children reading! So for me a great fic mixed with memeories of some great reads! Thanks! :)dphysh

Re: Fav Authors gaedhal November 15 2006, 03:19:40 UTC

I always thought that book would make a great film --
so Ron is going to make it! That's what I love about
fiction!