"Dog Days" 10

Jan 20, 2006 01:41

More of "The Angel Stream":

On the back deck.

Part 10 )

fanfiction, angel stream, brian/justin, dog days, qaf

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silentwhyte January 20 2006, 09:01:02 UTC
Brian pulled Justin closer to him. He could smell
something sweet on his breath. One of Darren's rich
desserts, most likely. "Be careful, Justin. I'm not
kidding. This evening shift you're working now, I
don't know about it...."

I love seeing a protective Brian! It looks good on him ;)

"I park in the Watermark lot and I
come right home after my shift's over. What could
happen to me?"

lol, where I work they make us park as far away as humanly possible, actually we have to park in a different parking lot from the restuarant. But, at the end of the night the make damn sure that at least two people are walking out, never just one person, especially a woman.

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llvoncan January 20 2006, 14:58:51 UTC
Why do I get a feeling that the good times won't last....
Maybe it's lines like these:
"What could happen to me?"

"Nothing." Brian stared up at the sky. The moon was
almost full. "Nothing could happen."

And Justin was fearless. Fucking fearless.

Brian wished that he could say the same for himself.

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damietta January 20 2006, 19:11:22 UTC
"But I think it's a lot more likely that he's going to break mine."

Oh, no, not in the Angel Stream!

I really liked the visual paragraph about all the sirens. It gave a real sinister feel to everything (which, of course, is happening with Stockwell).

Deb

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gaedhal January 20 2006, 20:30:56 UTC
This may be "The Angel Stream" but it's taking
place in Stockwell's Pittsburgh. There was no
Justin to urge Brian to fight against him, so
he won the election.

And now they all must face the consequences --

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shadownyc January 20 2006, 21:17:13 UTC
That was such a touching chapter. Brian's concern for Justin and his love for him are expressed in a very moving way that truly touched my heart.

The atmosphere of the sirens all around and for a variety of reasons and Brian's concern about Justin's dinner shift hours leant a tense sense of foreshadowing.

Great chapter!

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gaedhal January 20 2006, 21:43:20 UTC
Brian may not say things outright, but for people
who really know him, his feelings should be obvious --

Assuming they are paying attention!

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shadownyc January 20 2006, 22:56:30 UTC
I'm definitely paying attention!

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anonymous January 21 2006, 03:34:53 UTC
I hate what Stockwell has done to Brian. m

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