fanfiction - another world: chapter 05

[dark_hyde]

Title: Another World (Chapter 05/06)
Author: dark_hyde
Rating: PG13
Summary: Gackt and YFC are about to set out on their first tour through America when something unexpected happens, threatening their plans to falter.
Notes: Thank you mun_chairudo for beta-reading! :)

Comments

[krystal_32206]

What?!? Nooo!!! Sho's dead?
Well your warning says there'll be death of a character but..Sho?!?
Okay..you still have to explain how Sho came out of fictional Mallepa. And how Marlowe got her grubby claws on him.
Sorry if I sound a bit demanding. :)
Anyways, this fic could be an action movie starring YFC... ;)
Thanks for updating!

[dark_hyde]

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! :)

It makes me happy that you think my story could be an action movie. People have told me that before and I really like the thought. It's cool. :D

[k_no_uta]

;______________________;

[dark_hyde]

Thank you for reading. ._______.

[k_no_uta]

Is...is it the last chapter? ;_; No miracle anymore? Y___Y

[dark_hyde]

It's not the last chapter, there's gonna be one more. But a miracle won't happen either way I'm afraid. .__.

[saurgristiel]

*blubbering mess* T_________T SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

*pets* Come here, I won't hurt you, or torture you...

It was so sad but so good... (I'm glad Jon was the one to get kidnapped, not one of the others...)

[dark_hyde]

Hey. Thank you. :)

I'm glad you liked it. But, uhm, why are you glad that Jon's the one who got kidnapped? Do you like him less? I'm just curious. ^^

[saurgristiel]

^_^ *wiggles for next part*

Well... He seems manlier than the other chickenz. Tougher (even though he's a dork XD, and panicked when they were running away), and he know English, which, having this take place in America, is a really good thing.

No, he's my cute dorky egg X3 *luffles him*

[kazeryl]

Heck! Sho is dead..?
Thanks for this. But...T__________T

[dark_hyde]

Thank you! :)

I'm glad you liked it, even though it's sad...

[pirate_mozart]

Oh, Sho... T_T This chapter is so sad... but also really action packed! Okay, if I read the warning tags, I knew someone was going to die, but... well, it's still sad. But really believable...

And they're just going to get up and go do the show... Gackt's so tough.

This chapter is really intense (good, but intense)!

[dark_hyde]

Thank you for leaving me a comment! I appreciate it. :)

I'm glad you liked this chapter so much. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on it.