GaaNaru fic - "The Burning"

[harmonyopc]

This is my first Gaara/Naruto fic EVAR. *Heh* Hope you enjoy.
PG-13 for now, but you can bet on it progressing to R/NC-17 in later chapters! ;)

Comments

[harmonyopc]

Thank you so much! *grin* hoping to work on Chapter 2 this week!

[kuukiventomu]

This is great. I hope to read more soon. :)

[harmonyopc]

Thank you! I'm hoping to write more ASAP. I love this pairing :)

[hisoka44]

Oh my! What a delightful start... *g* I do pity Gaara, though. What with Naruto being as dense as Jiraiya is perverted, it'll either take a long while for anything to happen - or a short/violent/explosive 'caught-together-in-an-elevator-without electricity' kind of situation.
Hopefully, not only Gaara will get an early Christmas present... ;-)

BTW, if Gaara wears his sand armor - as you imply at the beginning - wouldn't the sand also cover that kind of problem? Becuase I don't think the sand's covering only the exposed body parts...

[harmonyopc]

You are so right about the dense factor. The elevator-type situation would be a good one, though! *g* Awesome idea!

Thank you for pointing that out about the sand armor! I don't know enough about it TBH, I need to research. I may need to alter this a little bit, or at least give an explanation for that! ;) thank u again!

[hisoka44]

Thank you for this compliment! #^__^#
...although I don't think they have elevators in this world. Any closed-off-alone situation would do, wouldn't it? Like...a cave entrance crumbling and Naruto gets caught inside with Gaara. Of course, usage of any jutsu would only cause further rockslides, so they'd have to wait on being rescued from the outside.

As for the sand armor, well, you see it for example somewhere at the beginning. The chuunin exams in Konoha, when Gaara fights against Rock Lee and gets hit with a kick/punch. You can see it crumbling from his face, I think. From what I remember from the explanation, the sand is described as 'covering his (Gaara's) whole body - the ultimate defense' or something like that. IMHO that means all of him---wait, what's with putting on clothes, then? ...OMG! Is Gaara naked under his sand armor?!

[harmonyopc]

You cracked me up! I'm on it re: the "elevator" - I think I am going to have a situation like that occur in Chapter 3 or 4 (which reminds me, I posted Chapter 2 to FFN but forgot to post it here). Thank you re: the sand armor. I saw that episode of course, but it was a long time ago when I still hated Gaara. Gotta watch it again now.... At any rate, I think I know how to fix that part of Chapter 1. Will work on that now.