How Far We've Come(6/?)

Nov 18, 2007 12:20


Chapter 6: Beauty in the Breakdown
Pairing: Mark/Addison
Summary: Because Maddison is far from over....

When Mark stands and offers a hand to her, it takes only a second before Addison concedes and allows him to pull her from the stairs. He pulls her close and offers his support by placing an arm around her waist. In a minute, Addison realizes she’s ( Read more... )

author: hopelessly_lazy, shipper: mark/addison

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anonymous November 18 2007, 17:35:55 UTC
OMG...this chapter mos absolutely perfect!
Mark's looking the image of his child was so heartbreaking!

And I loved this: "I saw it,” Mark states so ambiguously which causes her forehead to crinkle in confusion. “In the shoebox.”

She immediately knows what he’s talking about. “Oh.”

“You didn’t show it to me,” the pain in his voice is so blunt that all Addison wants to do is get up and run so she can cry in peace because she never wants to hear that much hurt and know that she’s to blame.

I hope Shonda will make Addison speak about the abortion...sooner or later!

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hopelessly_lazy November 18 2007, 17:46:30 UTC
Thanks and yeah, I'm hoping the subject gets touched on soonger or later because it really needs to although I guess it was kind of addressed during the "It's really not a pilot" pilot.

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abcdana November 18 2007, 17:53:53 UTC
Beautifully done. The shoebox thing seems very in-character for Addison. I could see her saving those things to look at. I loved Mark's reaction and how he confronted her and then comforted her about it. My favoritefavorite part was the end, though, where they are settling in to go to sleep. It was perfect.

I'm looking forward to more :)

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hopelessly_lazy November 18 2007, 18:03:45 UTC
Thank you.

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xyliette November 18 2007, 18:44:32 UTC
OH! Look at them. So cute. I love this story for various greatness...keep it up because I have officially become a Maddison shipper. :)

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anonymous November 18 2007, 19:24:30 UTC
I love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter

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agzee November 19 2007, 04:55:31 UTC
so much love for this story, i miss my maddison

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