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Rebirth- Chapter 16

Mar 30, 2007 23:29

Title: Rebirth
Rating: NC-17
Author: Tonysgirl02 AKA Kimmer
Summary: This takes place after 3.12. This way go along with what I'm hearing will happen in the upcoming episodes but this will be my verison.
Pairings: Mainly Callie/George. All the friendships and what not.

Ask and you shall recieve, once I get it written. :)

( so you need to take it easy )

author: tonysgirl02, shipper: george/callie

Comments 18

anonymous April 1 2007, 04:19:06 UTC

YAY! I screamed when I saw this. So happy that Baby O is okay and that George and Callie are happy at least for now and hopefully for a while. Thank you for another great chapter

tonysgirl02 April 1 2007, 17:11:42 UTC

They'll be happy for maybe a chapter :) George is just a silly man and has some growing up to do. He'll get there, one day. Thank you for reading.

navyblue_scrubs April 1 2007, 04:58:55 UTC

oh goshh...i am SO glad this is posted.

it was a reaaalllyy great chapter especially because i just got back from babysitting two little kids who wouldnt go to sleep...

so...yayyyy i can't wait until an update!

tonysgirl02 April 1 2007, 17:12:34 UTC

Kids who won't go to sleep are a pain. George and Callie will be taken to school on that in a few months ;)

Another update should come sometime this week.

_nigella_ April 1 2007, 05:06:28 UTC

so psyched to see another update! this chapter was fantastic - so glad to see baby o is fine, loved george's reaction to izzie, loved the final scene in the bedroom, and i just CANNOT wait for the wedding!

tonysgirl02 April 1 2007, 17:14:22 UTC

Baby O had to be fine. We're not done with Izzie by any means. Her, George and Callie still have a long road to go and to be honest, I'm not sure how it'll go. Depends on how much she pisses me off when I write. LOL. That final scene came really easily. I could just see it in my mind. I loved it as well. Thanks for reading!

Wedding will be in a few chapters time.

vietangel80 April 1 2007, 05:41:38 UTC

Excellent chapter as usual. I'm glad Baby O is okay. George held it together very well for as long as he could...the moment at his father's grave was great. Harold's a very smart man, and he helped George come to some very important realizations about where he wants his life to go with Callie. He's right about Callie holding on to this thing with her mother...she does need to close that chapter in her life, but at the same time I think he's starting to get why she can't do it. Her emotions are fragile, their child is growing inside her, and she just can't fathom how her mother didn't feel the same way about her as she feels about Baby O. Her being pregnant is making the hurt she felt all her life so much greater now. No matter how much Louise loves her, it still doesn't make up for not having her own mother there to help her through the pregnancy ( ... )

tonysgirl02 April 1 2007, 17:18:39 UTC

I love when you ramble. It's fabo and I love the reflection upon the chapter. It helps me. If I get stuck on a chapter, I'll come back and read the reviews. So please continue to ramble!!!

Baby O had to be fine. She's the whole purpose for this story in a way. The grave moment, I had planned for later chapters, but I was writting and suddenly George was running and Harold was there, so I thought lets just go with it, I';m sure Harold has something to say and he did. That is not the last we'll see from Harold beyond the grave. He still has a lot to add and in a way George needs him.

The mother thing is hard. Callie is longing for answers that she was possibly just starting to get and she';s coming to all these realizations about being pregnant and the love she's feeling for her own child. Wde may or may not see this chapter close soon, it depends how I feel come the wedding.

asirnay April 1 2007, 16:11:57 UTC

Wow. I loved how you had Harold play Obi Wan Kenobi to George. In your story, you actually see how much George has grown, from Bambi to the man Callie needs him to be-especially with Baby O on the way. I always loved the relationship between Callie and Louise. I'm glad George isn't friends with Izzie anymore, at least in this story, because I don't really care too much for that character right now. Can't wait for the next chapter...

tonysgirl02 April 1 2007, 17:21:47 UTC

George isn't done growing yet and neither is Callie. Her changes are more suttle and will be seen more once Baby O does arrive, but she has some growing up yet to do as well. At moments, we're seeing George shine to his full potential of who he can be and at others he's somewhere between Bambi and George the man. He may be all grown up by the time Baby O comes, he may not. I loved writting that scene with Harold, it was something George needed and it won't be the last. I enjpy writting the relationship between Callie and Louise. Yeah George and Izzie friendship in the story is back on for at least a few chapters.