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One Wintry Night

Dec 23, 2009 23:10

Author:greys_addict
Title: One Wintry Night
Pairing: Mark/Callie
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Callie and Mark spend a night at home and get a little surprise.
Written for:kansasspice ga_fanfic Secret Santa exchange

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!secret santa, !secret santa 2009, shipper: mark/callie, author: greys_addict

Comments 8

anonymous December 24 2009, 05:02:51 UTC

“Mark! Little pitchers have big ears!” Callie squealed as Callie worked her lips around Callie’s ear.

I think you might need to edit that?

-B

greys_addict December 24 2009, 17:26:28 UTC

LOL! I just noticed that! Thanks. I had re-read this twice before posting and didn't see it. It originally started as an Arizona/Callie fic. Oops. Thanks for telling me!

anonymous December 24 2009, 17:35:28 UTC

Yeah, you've still got Arizona's name in there (along with lots of incorrect speech tags, but hey, who am I to judge?).

greys_addict December 25 2009, 01:32:28 UTC

Thanks. It wasn't beta'd and I fixed Arizona's name.

Thread 5

poisoned_candyy December 25 2009, 05:54:54 UTC

You used my name as MD's daughter's name. *thud* That was the greatest thing EVER to see in a fic. That was a brilliant surprise. <3 Totally unexpected too, so thank you so much! :D

And of course, the smut and the surprise at the end were great too :D Thank you so much hun! <3

greys_addict December 25 2009, 14:53:04 UTC

Aw, you're welcome! I didn't know that was your name but so glad it worked out! I love the name Amelia. merry Christmas!

poisoned_candyy December 25 2009, 18:10:25 UTC

Awww, well thank you! <3 And Merry Christmas! :D