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NOT FINE: WAKING UP

Jun 26, 2008 13:41

Title: Not Fine: Waking up
Author: mrsfjl66
Pairings: maddison, mer/der, but as always, Madtina friendship is the thing.
Rating: R for language
Disclaimer: The characters, settings and initial plotlines represented herein are the property of ABC, Shonda Rhimes, and any other entities having an ownership interest in Grey ( Read more... )

character: meredith, character: addison, character: cristina, shipper: mark/addison, shipper: derek/meredith, author: mrsfjl66

Comments 24

anna_in_the_sky June 26 2008, 19:55:11 UTC

Ooh yes, you just made my day!

And I realized what's really awesome and fascinating about your writing is how you put the characters into situations which, on the one hand, you don't think the writers would ever dare to put them in on the show - because they're chickens - and which, on the other hand, you'd totally die to see. And you go and write them, perfectly in-character and still stunning and awe-inducing. Like the weirdly fun moment that is Addison and Meredith having ice-cream together at Meredith's house. You win! Seriously.

Also, I love assertive Meredith! As in “I noticed. But the ice cream is free here and besides, I threw out all of my Addison dart boards and ‘I heart McDreamy’ mugs weeks ago.”

Loved the bonding over nannies and housekeepers. And Cristina complaining about Hahn and Callie. I was very bothered by that scene on the show, so I like to see follow-up.

Mark so is the male Cristina! Which, again, just screams 'slang'!

mrsfjl66 June 26 2008, 20:18:25 UTC

oh I'm so glad you liked. I don't deliberately put them in strange situations;) Just kinda happens. Yes, Mark and Cristina so scream slang but I like Maddison too so I'm torn. I know you don't like the shippy stuff as much but are we ok there? Still realish? I trust your eye as you know;) A thousand thank yous for the feedback! You win!

anna_in_the_sky June 26 2008, 21:34:50 UTC

Oh, don't get me wrong, I love Mark with Addison in your fic. You could always just write another fic altogether for SLANG. And, I always do like and even enjoy the shippy stuff when it is believable and in-character. Even Meredith/Derek! So, don't worry about me. Besides, I like the fact that Addison and Mark adress their issues, even if they're having the same fights over again. At least they're having them, unlike other Grey's couples. ;-)

mrsfjl66 June 26 2008, 21:57:38 UTC

thanks for replying to my feedback whoring:) I heart you. And I know you're in it for real, so that's why I asked.

Oh I can't help the SLANG love I have. I'll just have to write and read more fic. Poor me.

citron_presse June 26 2008, 21:17:08 UTC

I can't tell you how excited I got when I saw you'd updated this and it was awesome.

I would quote from your amazing, quicksilver dialogue, but there's just too much that I loved. I'm in awe of how you work so much insight and intelligence and emotion into brilliant, funny lines. And your Mark and Addison are perfect, in character and exactly how they should be together.

Thank you so much for this :)

mrsfjl66 June 26 2008, 22:11:45 UTC

thank you! I take forever to update but I love these characters, and I needed the maddison feedback...I was nervous because there was major revision with those two. Did I mention thank you?

anonymous June 27 2008, 05:57:32 UTC

I was starting to think you weren't going to update this story.Once again the Mer/Addie/Christina friendship was awesome.Christina really is starting to sound like a male Mark.I seriously think Christina should be be named the Queen of all things snarky,at least in this story.As much as I love the funny parts I'm glad you took the time to address some of the real issues with Mark/Addison.I loved that he even though he isn't okay with it he admitted that he wasn't ready for a relationship and a baby back then because I truly believe he wasn't no matter what he said on the show about them being happy.He was cheating and she clearly hadn't moved on from her husband so I really didn't get how he convinced himself they'd be happy so I didn't feel sorry for him that much especially since it seemed like he was blaming everything on her.I hope we get to see more of this kind of stuff between them between the funny parts.

Jody

mrsfjl66 June 28 2008, 01:14:27 UTC

I'm happy to name Cristina queen of anything. I love her. Thank you so much for the detailed feedback particularly on Mark/Addie.

roedeers June 27 2008, 20:42:08 UTC

Ohh this was aweomse... I love the Mere Addison friendship ^^

&hearts

mrsfjl66 June 28 2008, 01:14:58 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked;)

roedeers June 28 2008, 19:03:13 UTC

I forgot to write that I think you mix the awesome humor/comedy with the serious issue that all these character has !

I hope you will write more of this series

Yay!!! dmdell119 June 28 2008, 05:08:11 UTC

I'm so happy for this update!

I heart you and Madtina and sick+sad Derek and serious+Thin Mint-obsessed Mark. :P

Re: Yay!!! mrsfjl66 June 28 2008, 17:10:53 UTC

I heart you too! Thanks for reading and commenting. It means bunches!