Turtle Story: Stalking the Vigilante Part 2

[g33kg1rl]

 
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Fighting these low-time thugs were always way to easy. They had no skill and they relied purely on intimidation. It was almost like a lame game of ‘see who attacks first’ for Raphael. Due to the fact most of the guys he busted up during robberies were usually simpletons; they were typically to chicken-shit to start the fights anyway.

Comments

[my_fool_took]

Eee Mikey :) He's so adorable lol.
I looved Donnie spraying coffee across the room lol and the poor dear's horrified mental images. Also loved Raph (er... Nightwatcher) and Mikey's heart to heart, and ah just all of it.

[izzysgoobots]

This has to be the coolest fics I've read so far! AWESOME WORK! I quite enjoyed reading this! It felt so real! :D

[g33kg1rl]

*laughs* i'm so happy you enjoyed Donnie spraying his coffee across half the kitchen XD i'm glad i kept it in there now!

[geaven]

Yay, an update! ^^

This chapter included some interesting character study. I liked it how you got into Raph's pov as the Nightwatcher, and how he got to know some hidden facts about his own family from Mikey who thought he was talking to a stranger... Geez, how complicated everything got, huh?

I hope for some more Don/Raph interaction soon! (And please don't keep us waiting for so long, I've practically been going through withdrawal!)

[g33kg1rl]

Awe, thank you. I'm sooooo relieved that someone thinks I did indeed get into Raph's head at that moment. Raph is smart and VERY observant in my book, but I think that because he's been -so- angry the last two years, that the observant side of him was shoved to the back burner for a while (cause typically I'd feel like Raph would be the FIRST to recognize if Donnie is depressed and so on).

oi, and the complicated just got started. I ALWAYS do this in stories. I actually had the whole thing done, but I now need to go back and rewrite portions of it and add more to it now because the muse is whispering those tantalizing words of: "It would be so much better if you add this... or do this instead of..." and so on. oi... *rubs brow* but that's okay. gives me a chance to fix more of my mistakes :)

and, um... Raphael and Don's interaction... eh... next weeks update on monday will be.. um... more lively........ though I'm not sure if ya'll will like it o.0`

I'm planning on update the next chapter on Thursday, :) whish me luck!

[geaven]

"(...)not sure if ya'll will like it", huh? Does this mean that there will be some sort of "That's it, I'm breaking up with you" drama (jealousy in some way, maybe?)? I doubt that, since they've loved each other more than anything for TEN YEARS now, but still...

Oh well, I'll keep on waiting for the romance.

Good luck with writing!

[polaris2000]

I really like the way you write Mikey, and even though he probably wouldn't do something like this normally, I can see how stress and worry can make a person snap. Also, the brotherly heart to heart was really sweet. Not enough people write family bonding time.

[g33kg1rl]

yay! someone liked my brotherly bonding time ^-^ hopefully you'll like the next chapter then! thanks for the review!

[scoopgirl79]

I love this story... I could understand where you'd see Mikey snapping after Leo being gone for two years... I hope Mikey will be happy soon... And will we get some Raph/Don smut soon...??? Again I love your story... ;)

[g33kg1rl]

*pets the Mikey* He'll get to be happy... ... eventually... ... i'm so mean to the turtle-boys! ;_;

as far as Raph/Don smut, um... not just yet ^-^`` but it's coming! I promise! *nervous grin*

[scoopgirl79]

Oh goody... :)

[aloneindarknes7]

I love Mikey so much! You did an awesome job writing him and Nightwatcher. I think all fics with Mikey and Nightwatcher are just great since we get to see fanboy!Mikey in action!