Turtle Story: They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy Ch.3 part 2

[g33kg1rl]

They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy Ch.3
~Part 2~

Raphael's head bobbed and he lifted his face again, staring at nothing yet looking towards the distance as though looking past the buildings and to a far bright blue sky beyond. "Yes."

Comments

[robina1984]

I luvs you. So nummy and wonderful and perfect and heartwrenching....Leo guiding all three was marvelous! I sorta forgive you for the teasing now. ^_^ Yay for Leo confessing and Mike realizing what a jerk he was. LOL. And Raph and Don! ;_; Both hurting, both needing to heal and forgive...

Next chapter now?

[senachan]

The part with Don sitting there crying silently as Leo fed him killed me. Cause I totally do that. D:
Poor Leo having to step up to the plate and fix everything he may or may not have caused is awesome. It fills in the cracks and gives a great sort of irony to the story that breathes life into it....or maybe I dunno what I'm talking about and really just think it's a great sort of cosmic justice for him to fix what he caused. =_=;;

[g33kg1rl]

OH! D: I know!!! the Donnie scene with him crying, totally pulled that from my own life because I do that too! if I'm upset, I'd rather not make a sound and sit very still than to just burst into tears. I usually wait till there is an opening and then I run for it and hide in my room or the bathroom and try and get control of myself

[aloneindarknes7]

This chapter was really good and very emotional but there were a lot of typos and errors which was odd because you're normally good about that. Still, the few mistakes were easy to look away from due to the heart breaking plot that so easily drew me in. Well, now it's out in the open about everything except to Raph. Raph is kinda still clueless about most stuff. Also, I think Leo is kinda a jerk telling Raph to look for Don and then going off himself to Don's hiding spot. Talk about a wild goose chase...

[g33kg1rl]

((... i'll have to re-read it o.o I thought I found all the typos and stuff last night. .... but it was 4 in the morning

*wibble*

[okamichan]

You know, as much as Leo's trying to be helpful, and as much as I was in absolute wibble mode during Don's scene, Mike's scene drew me right out of it. Because it seemed to me that Leo did to Mike, what Mike had done to Raph. It might have taken a lot of courage to open up to Mikey like that, but Leo could have picked a better time.

But still, very emotionalangst! chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

[carmontoya13]

Will there be more of this soon? Please? I really love this fic! The setup is really brilliant and so angst-filled.