Turtle Story: They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy Ch.2 part 2

[g33kg1rl]

They Stumbles Toward Ecstasy
Part 2 of Chapter 2:

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He hurried after him, trailing behind him like a puppy. Michelangelo stopped in the doorway of his brother's room, hesitating only a moment before he made his decision.

Comments

[senachan]

... D:
The line "Not you too..." got me. Got me so hard. Now implies Donnie has been betrayed by more than just those two.
I think I'm bawling a little too hard for me to respond properly... ;A;
It's awesome so far though. I couldn't ask for more in an angst fic. :D

[g33kg1rl]

D: I didn't mean to make you cry! ... okay well maybe, but not BAWL!

But I'm glad my Angst-Queen crown isn't in jeopardy of falling off XD I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it! :D hopefully the next chapters will hold up for you too :3

[aloneindarknes7]

This I did not see coming but am so thrilled by the prospect!~ Is this one of those Raph loves Don who loves Leo who loves Mikey who loves Raph fics? Because I think it is but with a twist of Don finally learning to love Raph a little only to now think that Raph loves Mikey too. Still, whatever direction that this fic takes, it is brilliant! I am so hyped up right now by pure bliss and enjoyment!~

[g33kg1rl]

o///o *blush* I'm glad you're liking it so much. and you are toooo smart XD that or I'm just REALLY obvious. heehee XD

but hopefully i'll get to surprise you more with the next chapters ;)

[okamichan]

*wibbles* All around there is only pain pain pain. Honestly, I think you did a good job with the 'betrayal'. It made sense, even without your explanation. ;)

[g33kg1rl]

XD ahahha, thank you. I'm glad (honestly, i put the explanation there so that I wouldn't have to answer that question XD ) so yay! it translated in the writing <3 you made my day. thank you.

and yes o_o lots of pain. .... ... I am the Angst-Queen. but I'm also a lover of happy endings ;)