Turtle fic: Crashing the Cycle

[g33kg1rl]

He didn't remember what happened. Well, Donnie thought he had been riding the Shell Cycle to test out the new cylinders. Memories of skidding around the corner of the street and back to the garage were fresh in his mind and all he could claim. Though… there was the sound of a click and suddenly the breaks didn't work bubbling to the surface of his

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[aloneindarknes7]

This was wonderful! I really liked how Raph and Don got to experience the different side of the situation for once. It was a good way for them to get into the others' shoes and whatnot.

[robina1984]

*flails* Noooooooo! Space and you are chatting and getting fics and I'm missing it all! Stupid 9 days straight of third. *sigh* ;_;

Oh, I enjoyed this. It's always fun to see roles reversed, and I can imagine the panic Raph must have went through. Poor turtle...

I LOVED this part though:

"Idiot!" Raphael barked and startled Donnie. He looked back to him, staring up into those blazing gold eyes that were knitted together with pain and fear. "I don't care about the fucking bike!" He snapped and tugged him back towards him, his arms wrapping tightly about Don's shoulders, the bridge of his nose pressing tight to his cheek. "I care about you." he hissed, his voice sounding so hushed and choked.

I melted. Just...<3

[spacefille]

Don't be sad I haven't gotten a Damgel fic in a half a year at least! :D

[spacefille]

Thanks for writing this Dangel! I very much enjoyed watching fic writing occur again! :D Also I very much support a Dr. Raph! ;)