TMNT fic - Locked in a Cardboard Box

May 27, 2010 23:09

The seven year old boys had had a fight earlier about training with the bokkens and Splinter had sent Raph to his room all because Leo had been a better liar.

Sniffing at the air and glaring at the box, Raphael turned and marched away, ignoring the guilt he felt - that would eventually pass anyway.

Leonardo shook and he fought back tears. The ( Read more... )

one-shot story, nc-17, love, ninja turtles, pairings: leoxmikey, angst

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catc10 May 28 2010, 08:15:51 UTC
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*prints*
ME

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g33kg1rl May 29 2010, 00:38:40 UTC
*blush* wow... thank you :3

~Melissa the Damgel

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robina1984 May 28 2010, 11:52:25 UTC
I still love the emotion and beauty you put into this. It's amazing and wonderful. I wanted to cry happy tears for them, it pulled at my heart so. <3

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g33kg1rl May 29 2010, 00:43:31 UTC
*hugs!* aw! :3 you're the best. And you're the best inspiration for a lot of my writing!! :D

~Melissa the Damgel

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g33kg1rl May 29 2010, 00:42:11 UTC
*BLUSH!* wow.... o///o thank you.... I'm glad you liked it~ that certainly does make me feel good about my writing (I'm currently in a writing slump and feel like I have no skill whatsoever). And it makes me happy to know you liked it :)

thank you so much for this comment *hugs on you~*

~Melissa the Damgel

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karasuookami May 28 2010, 16:10:40 UTC
I'm blaming it on hormones. *wipes tears* This was amazing and wow. One of the best writen of my OTP. Thank you Thank you Thank you for sharing.

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g33kg1rl May 29 2010, 00:39:48 UTC
Aw... thank you *blush* I'm glad you liked - I love Mikey/Leo and I wish there was more of them! they are so cute~ and they balance each other so well~

~Melissa the Damgel

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anticia May 28 2010, 22:07:06 UTC
*squeeeee*

Yes yes, just today when I was whining moping that there is not enough LM fic and I want to read one finally! ;__;
And I didn't even intended to look for cause it's hopeless anyways and I don't have all time. And then I accidentally open LJ (LOL I never come lately XD; ) and just bump into this! D'=
I couldn't belive to my eyes! And especially when I started to read!
Aww it was really lovely with the kids part X3

And with the poem Leo wrote... ;___;
Haha Mikey ambushed him - Leo was really unbalanced that he got off-guarded. XD
Luckily Mikey is TERRIBLE containing his emotions, X'333

You got a really great job with the emotions in my opinion.
And thank you for making my day with this (or night, it's late here already XD)

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g33kg1rl May 29 2010, 00:37:11 UTC
Aw~ I'm so happy! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad I had great timing for it! ANd I know how you feel about there not being enough Leo/Mike in the world (for me, there is not enough Raph/Don in the world). But I'm happy you liked it... I too am really happy with how it turned out

XD and yes, Mikey is horrible at hiding his emotions - especially when they are so precious to him. :)

And thank you. That makes me happy that you enjoyed it~ :3

~Melissa the Damgel

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