I never write what I set out to write, goddamnit.

Apr 30, 2007 07:10

I promised Kiwi Grimmjow/Ichigo. And I meant to write them, I really did. :| Instead, I end up with this. Because I was reading ch. 236, and somehow got the impression that these two'd met before. So, um. Yeah. CRACK ENSUED. :DDD It's pretty much gen. Maybe there'll be GrimmIchi in the next one. >>; *sigh*

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orochimaru_han April 30 2007, 16:04:42 UTC
Hahaha! Goodgood! You should write moar.

Tea time indeed, poor Grimmjow. I'd hate to be him showing up late for that. I hope Aizen sama isn't too displeased with him.

Too bad Shinji doesn't realize that a good cup of tea is just as good as coffee.

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fyretoppaaa May 1 2007, 10:00:52 UTC
XD;; I definitely need the practice...

LOLOL he'll prolly just make him down a few extra cups. With extra sugar. 8DDD HYPOGLYCEMIA FER GRIMMJOW~

Well, at two o'clock in the morning coffee is betimes more practical. *noddu* Fyre disagreeeeees with this. She is a 2 AM tea drinker herself. XD

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orochimaru_han May 1 2007, 15:15:03 UTC
If you practice I get to read moar? Then get to it!

Grimmjow on a sugar high seems like a bad plan in the making, and like such a crack fic too. Haha, I'm going into diabetic shock just thinking about sugar in tea.

I'll take a Green Tea frap over coffee any time of day. Though I do love me some coffee... wait does that even count as tea? Uh, well, normal green tea is win too.

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redex April 30 2007, 21:47:51 UTC
Yey, Jinxi!Writing! ♥ It has been so loooooong~~~ ♥

I also uploaded this icon justforyou. X3 This fic was begging for it.

How Grimmjow and Shinji met in this darkened ally on the wrong side of town seems rather vague, and kind of makes the opening of this rather screwy, but I suppose it might partly be in character with Shinji. I suppose I've always characterized as one of those blade-like minds hidden behind a daily foolishness.

Then again, I'm not sure how much critique you would like on this. :3 I always enjoy reading it, you know, seme-chan~

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fyretoppaaa May 1 2007, 10:03:16 UTC
It has been a bit since I last wrote anything. ^.^;;

HEEEEEE ICON. XDDDD LOL. What is it of~?

Well, I was going off the premise that once removed as an Espada, Grimmjow would've gone off on his own little whims and killed shit so. Randomly in the human world & detected/intercepted by Shinji? 8DDDD Mmm, that's the way I see him, too; you can see glimpses of that throughout the Vaizard chapters. :3

Fufufu. ♥ I always love critique. :O It's just a silly scribble, though. XD; *siiiigh* I wanted to see how they might mesh.

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orochimaru_han May 1 2007, 15:09:34 UTC
*cue jumping in where I don't belong* That icon is Blood+

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redex May 3 2007, 00:06:47 UTC
Don't make that silly face at me, you... silly thing. XD; You need to write moooaaaarrr~~

Blood+ :3 Which, as canon, is completely unfunny, but still.

O, I see. Once he looses his arm? Thatmighthappen. ♥ The latest episodes of the anime have been totally capitalizing on badass!Shinji. If anything, they ruin the characterization a bit with how blatant they're being, but it's still nice to watch.

You and your crackpairings. I can't really see this one, but you can do whatevahyouwant! Silly scribbles are the start of something better! *pokes to write more pokepoke*

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taekwonangel May 8 2007, 01:13:35 UTC
I have to admit that the thought I was left with was "this should be canon, dammit."

...it almost definitely won't be canon, but you've created a fun moment nonetheless. I like how you write Shinji: aimless and careless and all over the place on the surface but no slouch underneath it all.

Aizen and his tea - oy. ^^

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fyretoppaaa May 9 2007, 18:42:24 UTC
XDDD Cool! I'm flattered you thought the characterization was up to par with canon. ♥

I love Shinji for his silliness, but I live for the moments when he goes all VAIZARD-LEADER on your ass. *_* He's really fun to write, actually. XDDD

Aizen-sama's bankai probably involves tea. XDXDXD

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taekwonangel May 10 2007, 05:24:43 UTC
Shinji reminds me of Urahara - goofy as all hell but more than likely running the show. I love them both for it. ^^

Aizen-sama's bankai probably involves tea. XDXDXD
It almost definitely does; probably compels everyone within hearing range to drop their weapons and sit down for 'tea' (and get close enough and still enough for him to stab them personally, as that seems his style?)

...I'm sorry for that mental image. Ow. ^^;;

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shashu1191 May 8 2007, 20:31:51 UTC
TEA-TIME~

I think I 'rofl'-d
about seven times. srsly.

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fyretoppaaa May 9 2007, 18:43:27 UTC
Haha! XD I'm glad the crack made you laugh. ;3 Thanks for the feedback~

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coconut_fruit January 30 2008, 01:35:04 UTC
This is made of epic win.

For one, I completely agree with taekwonangel - your characterisation was amazing. Secondly, the crack was wonderful... ahh, poor Grimmjow's fun was spoiled. *snigger*

Fantastic work!

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