STOP LOOK LISTEN

Sep 08, 2008 01:01



Title:  Stop Look Listen
Author:  fuzzyshy
Pairing:  Callie/Erica
Rating:  PG-13
Disclaimer:  Grey's Anatomy and its characters and locations are the property of ABC Studios and Shonda Rhimes. This story is meant purely to entertain. No copyright infringement intended.
Author’s Notes:  This one is for Read more... )

fic, callie/erica

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x0xmarie0x0 September 7 2008, 17:46:27 UTC
Oh My...
You're a awesome writer, seriously...

I, I just love it, even if it's really sad ! It's amazing how just those few words and sentences can be just what we need to understand !

Amazingly well done !

Mouah !! XX

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fuzzyshy September 7 2008, 17:54:00 UTC
Thank you marie! =) You reading my ficS (now more than one) really means a lot to me.

Thank you for loving it although it's heartbreaking. I hope I didn't break your heart when I killed one of them. =)

*kisses*

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x0xmarie0x0 September 7 2008, 17:57:05 UTC
It is and will always be a pleasure to read your fic, even if you kill one of them !

Don't worry, my heart will hell fast if you make her live long in a other fic ! ;P

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I <3 YOU! thecon12 September 7 2008, 17:54:34 UTC
First comment I hope! =D

Aww you dedicated this to me (((MASSIVE HUGS!))) Thank you! I love this and I love *you* even more!

I've already told you I think this is genius but I'm going to do it again....It's GENIUS!

However you came up with the the idea of "Stop, Look, and Listen" and made it into a brilliant one-shot I'll never know.

My favorite thing about this is the way there's such intense emotion written behind each simple line; they had be guessing who was saying what and what it meant. The ending was heartbreaking and I so didn't expect it to be Erica that died; she always appears to be so strong and independent that seeing her be that vulnerable with Callie took my breath away!

I hope you write more because you are *so* talented!

Big Hugs, Even Bigger Kisses and of course our very special =D's coming at you!

<3

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Re: I <3 YOU! fuzzyshy September 7 2008, 18:16:57 UTC
Too bad, Marie beat you with the first comment. But that's okay coz nothing beats reading it first right?

Of course, this was dedicated to you. I hope that you didn't mind that you had to share it with Brad. Both of you were constantly on my mind when I was writing this.

I was so nervous because I'm doing another style and I don't know how it will be accepted by the readers. I was too concerned if it was effective or confusing. And telling me that this is a GENIUS thing makes all my fear go away. You have an extraordinary way of chasing all my fears away.

This idea came to me when I was showering. LOL I was singing Stop Look Listen by Diana Ross and I was quite surprised that this fic ended up to be a sad one coz that song's a happy one.

For me, simple words and sentences are really more powerful than long winded ones. It's more intense and emotional.

It took your breath away? Then my work is done! =)

I'll never can thank you enough!

Massive Hugs, Kisses and this little guy =D back atcha!!

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light_cascades September 7 2008, 18:11:29 UTC
I really loved how you conveyed a story with such short lines. Amazing work. :]

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fuzzyshy September 7 2008, 18:19:30 UTC
Thank you so much!

*trying to convey MASSIVE gratitude by using a one-liner*

=D

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callica318 September 7 2008, 18:30:59 UTC
There should have been a tissue warning on this!! *Sniff* This was brilliantly written!! I absolutely adored it! I've been anxious for anything from you since 'Through Lexie's Eyes' which was fantastic and this was sooo worth the wait!! Beautiful story. Brilliant writer. That is all.

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fuzzyshy September 7 2008, 18:39:44 UTC
Sorry for not putting a tissue warning. =D If there was, then it will just spoil the heartbreaking surprise at the end. *winks*

Thank you so much for your continued support and awesome compliments!

=D

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fuzzyshy September 8 2008, 04:46:45 UTC
Glad you liked the new format. Thanks for reading me. =D

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