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Myshuno! prompt 3: Secrets.

Oct 01, 2013 17:03

Prompt: Never give away all your secrets. (from lauriempress)
Rating: Everyone
Word Count: 1292
Notes: Sorry, kinda long. But I wasn't sure how much was needed to set up what was coming. This is very much canon, but won't happen for a couple of generations yet. I keep going back to this character's story because, besides the current generation, it's the one I' ( Read more... )

simspiration: myshuno! 2013, *legacy of the pharaohs

Comments 17

mzyra October 1 2013, 21:50:36 UTC

'By Seth'
Yes, Seth would strongly disapprove of abusing women, especially when said women are quite young and pregnant... >.> He might like to smite that other woman and the other people involved though :P

I just hope the best for these two, but then they do seem to be involved in plot and that rarely bodes well...

fuzzy_spork October 2 2013, 17:16:25 UTC

Haha! I'll have to figure out how to give your Seth a cameo part. Probably involving smiting!

Oh these two are involved in some deep doodoo that unfortunately will not remain in their pasts.

leilia October 1 2013, 22:55:40 UTC

Interesting. I look forward to seeing how this plays out in the story. I kind of like the implications.

fuzzy_spork October 2 2013, 17:18:31 UTC

I've even contemplated rushing the first couple of generations through 5 or 6 chapters just so I can get to this particular story arc sooner. >_

rosefyre October 1 2013, 23:30:45 UTC

Well. This is just making me more curious. GET THERE! :P

esmeiolanthe October 1 2013, 23:56:33 UTC

Seconded!

And if I recall correctly from last year's Myshuno!, Neb turns out to be a really great guy, so I hope she finally comes around to realizing it.

fuzzy_spork October 2 2013, 17:21:31 UTC

Good recalling! Yes, he's not so bad. Itet though... she's got issues, I'm afraid. D:

fuzzy_spork October 2 2013, 17:20:06 UTC

I'm trying! D: At this point my crap computer is holding me back. I might have to resort to a heavy-on-text short-on-pictures approach just to get it told. :P

smoothiesims October 2 2013, 02:04:31 UTC

OOH THIS IS RELEVANT TO MY INTERESTS. I am so curious as to the context for this and where they'll go from here. Nicely done!

fuzzy_spork October 2 2013, 17:23:04 UTC

I need to get this told! D: Nothing like wanting to write stuff 3 generations down the line to motivate me to get the current generation done so I can get there faster. >_

dicreasy October 4 2013, 17:07:33 UTC

What a hateful woman. But I did enjoy reading this. I'm very intrigued by the snippets of this story arc you have posted and I'm looking forward to reading more.

fuzzy_spork October 4 2013, 18:32:30 UTC

You'll know who this noble woman is by the time this plays out in the legacy (she's a member of the royal household) and yes, she is very hateful. D:

lol... Well, a few more years of Myshuno and I'll have this whole story told before I actually SHOW it. >_< But hey, now you know the name of the man who calls her wife. ;)