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FIC - My Brother's Keeper 3/?

Jun 27, 2010 17:20

Title: My Brother's Keeper
Chapter Three: Words Unsaid
Rating: R
Warnings: A bit of descriptive gore and language. Oh, and angst. Words Unsaid
Description: Teenchesters! The Winchesters try to recover from a hunt gone wrong when the unexpected occurs. LimpSam! BigBrotherDean! DrivenPapaWinchester!
( Dean stared blankly at the plate in front of him... )

angst, fanfiction, supernatural, my brother's keeper

Comments 10

lavinialavender June 28 2010, 07:59:01 UTC

Oh man, this is getting so good! I'm really impressed. I'm getting a really big creepy vibe too now, with the ending. Ack. And poor Dean, in eighteen different kinds of trauma right now. I'm glad John's doing what it takes, too.

fuu_43 June 29 2010, 02:46:28 UTC

I'm glad you're liking it!:)

mimblexwimble June 28 2010, 20:08:38 UTC

Oh my. I'm starting to wonder if maybe it wouldn't have been better to simply let Sam go. It's messing with all of their heads. Poor Dean, feeling lonely. I can imagine it - just because Sam's there doesn't make everything okay, and it's not like the kid wants to do much talking. Part of me wants to grab John and give him a good shake for setting this kind of example for his kids, teaching them how not to move on - and part of me wants him to find something that'll help Sam.

This is a great story; I look forward to more!

fuu_43 June 29 2010, 02:48:43 UTC

Those Winchesters know how to hold onto stuff, don't they? LOL... So happy you are enjoying it - Even if you're a bit conflicted over what to do with Papa Winchester.

dianamartins June 29 2010, 16:41:23 UTC

Wow! I like the idea of attaching Sam to Dean! Can't wait for next chapter to come! Great job!

fuu_43 June 30 2010, 02:33:04 UTC

phlepa August 31 2010, 06:49:55 UTC

Wow this was so sad, I feel so bad for Sammy, Dean and John the poor boy's. Thanks for witing it.

cece_away April 18 2011, 17:20:00 UTC

Um? You are going to finish this right? Holy crapola, what is John going to do now? Steal a near dead body?

fuu_43 April 19 2011, 00:35:57 UTC

LOL - Yes, I do plan on finishing it. The last few months have been crazy... Hopefully the next chapter will be up in the next couple weeks. :D

cece_away April 19 2011, 01:01:04 UTC

Awesome! Looking forward to it. You're a talented writer. I have your Dove's Heart on my list of fics I can't stop thinking about.

I'd be thrilled if you PM me when you post more of this.