Pandora's Box

[furtum_victus]

The moment I step off the plane I feel nearly uncontainable fury rear its head like a clenched fist in the center of my chest.  I pause, my foot just inches above the slick black surface of the tarmac and tilt my head back slightly to scent the air.  Chemical exhaust, wet grass, the damp stench of decaying flesh underlined in sharp contrast of pine

Comments

[rhywnn]

I think you are too hard on yourself. I thought it was perfect - absolutely caught my interest

[furtum_victus]

Eh, I'm my own worst critic. Most of the things I've written lately just seem to be lacking something, can't quite put my finger on it though.

And you and I should scene at some point *squinty eyes*

[bridget_eden]

I put your writing here in this analyzer thing and it says write like Stephen King lol http://iwl.me/s/b3a26720 (kind of appropriate since you are in the same state) it told me I write like Dan Brown (another ME resident lol )