Comments | furahi: Zuri

furahi

Zuri

Jun 13, 2005 11:16

Comments 15

saberwolf0364 June 13 2005, 17:50:13 UTC

Hmm, not exactly the happy ending I was looking for, but I guess maybe that makes it more realistic. Overall, it was pretty good, just a little depressing.

furahi June 13 2005, 18:06:54 UTC

Thanks for the compliments.
Unfortunately the ending is the most important part of the story.

crocodile June 13 2005, 18:14:02 UTC

You obviously have some writing skill, but I hope the story isn't a reflection of how you usually feel.

crocodile June 13 2005, 18:37:09 UTC

furahi October 30 2005, 23:59:25 UTC

I had to screen the comment because this entry is now public

wow tsuyoto June 13 2005, 18:29:23 UTC

Very good story. I certainly felt for the characters. I was surprised by the ending, but I guess that is the law of the wild. The fact that I cared that Zuri died is a sign of good writing. You get an A+

Re: wow furahi June 13 2005, 18:44:43 UTC

Thank you very much for your compliments.
The story lacks a lot of literary ellements I wanted to put in it, but has many of my favorites anyway

tkcoyote June 13 2005, 18:31:05 UTC

I liked the story overall; however, I didn't much like the treatment of Zuri. Then again, you know my thoughts on the matter. I'm interested in your meaning of the story and if it reflects on a personal level.

furahi June 13 2005, 18:39:01 UTC

Well... we can talk if you want, wuff
Or you can read this, which also applies to you and shares many (but not nearly all :P) of my thoughts and feelings on the story.

siegewolf June 13 2005, 19:05:25 UTC

Is there any meaning to he name, Zuri?

furahi June 13 2005, 19:15:50 UTC

Zuri was my name long before the story (and shortly after Furahi). Zuri was a little lion cub born to the starlight pride in African Tails Muck, son of the king, Amani and ... not the queen, another Lioness called Sanlina ( ... )