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A Love Square? [8/10]

Apr 27, 2011 21:10

Title: A Love Square [Multi-Chap]
Author: Aina (funny4ains )
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TakaYama, TakaNoo, YamaJima
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, these pairings, just the story. Johnny-san is one lucky man. :(
Summary: Yamada Ryosuke is a normal freshmen in a new school. Together with his popular bestfriend Nakajima Yuto, they meet the three most popular ( Read more... )

hey! say! jump: yamada ryosuke, hey! say! jump: inoo kei, hey! say! jump: takaki yuya, fangirling: fanfiction, hey! say! jump: yabu kota, fangirling: takayama otp, hey! say! jump: chinen yuuri, hey! say! jump: nakajima yuto

Comments 27

m4rionett3 April 27 2011, 13:24:33 UTC

MEH SPOT!!!!!

m4rionett3 April 27 2011, 13:37:46 UTC

mou, u are rushing too much aina-chan~!! :((

I'm getting heart attack here *LOL*
out of sudden they're already confessing to each other...

well, skip that apart now... what'll they do next??
MY GOSH!! will they cheating behind their official BF??

KYAAAA!!! *I'm getting hyper here~*

hoho..maybe I shouldn't ask for update too much though... don't rush the next chap please~~

funny4ains April 27 2011, 13:45:26 UTC

HAHAHA I KNEW IT. =)) I'm sorry! :(
But I can't make this fic more than 10 chapters or else I'LL DIE. =))
so sorry. :))

I can't make them cheat! THATS HARSH. =)) that kiss was the closest to cheating that I can do. =))

again, i'm so sorry for rushing *i knew it* =)) sadly, i will be rushing the next chapter.
just think that this chapter and the next chapters happen in a span of a long time. =))

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funny4ains April 27 2011, 13:45:53 UTC

so sorry! :( *hides* =))

fkns April 27 2011, 15:28:57 UTC

"Takaki was looking for Yamada and saw him in the bathroom, washing his face. He went to the boy and kissed him fully in the lips."

o.o
*jaw drops*
way to go, Yuyan...

I felt a little sorry for Yuto and Inoo... but I like the idea of Takayama cheating on them~
but seriously.. they have to break up with them >.< now that they know that they like each other it will be impossible for them to
avoid sudden kissing scenes like that xD~!

I also wonder about Chinen. He doesn't have a crush on Yama-chan, does he xD? Maybe on Yuto? That would be complicated... I think you have to re-name this fanfiction xD that's not a love square anymore, but more like a love... chain? Don't know xD
Well, maybe he just feels left out~

Looking forward to the next two chapters <3

funny4ains April 27 2011, 15:38:56 UTC

IKR? THEY CHEATED! :| =)) hahaha. it's my fault....

yup. until now, i feel sorry for them too. but they won't be cheating anymore because.... lets wait for the next chapter. =)) HAHAHA

HAHAHA IKR? I've been thinking about the title. it should be like love hexagon or something. =)) hahaha lol but i'll stick with square 'cause chiijima and inoobu will happen later

there, those are the clues! =)) AHHAHA

fkns April 27 2011, 21:33:12 UTC

no cheating?
fine with me because that means.... hmmmmmmm ^______^

funny4ains April 28 2011, 07:16:08 UTC

HAHAHA LOL. =))))))

thank you again for reading! <3

sakana93 April 27 2011, 16:12:34 UTC

its a bit embarrassed but I SUPPORT THE CHEATING THING ANYWAY XD
*since it d make ur story hotter lol* yes i admit that my mind is not very clean XD
*get whacked*

funny4ains April 28 2011, 07:17:19 UTC

hahaha green-minded person! *as if i'm not* =))
but i cannot write those kinds yet. lol. in the future. =))
*TakaYama whacks me for not writing smut*

azukin_notsumi April 27 2011, 20:10:39 UTC

I'm feeling like I have to enjoy the last seconds of Yamajima happiness... u.u

Thanks for the update!

funny4ains April 28 2011, 07:17:54 UTC

... yup you do... :( awww!!

haha you're welcome!!!