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Nov 07, 2008 21:30

Ladies and gentlemen, the first sentence of my personal statement for graduate admission:

On a torrid, stifling morning in June of 2008 in Mae Sot, Thailand, I stood in front a one-room classroom staring at twenty pre-school aged children that had no teacher.

And I'm off...

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milsta November 8 2008, 20:32:10 UTC
may i make a suggestion? since i edit compulsively and i love you?

try it this way: "On a stifling June morning in Mae Sot, Thailand, I stood in front a one-room classroom and stared at twenty pre-school aged children who had no teacher."

this is obviously going to be an awesome personal statement. just like you. I LOOOOOVE YOU.

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