Fic: Bigger On The Inside (H50, Lori/Max)

Feb 19, 2012 23:15

Title: Bigger On The Inside
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV Series)
Rating: G
Characters: Lori Weston/Max Bergman, Danny Williams
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Summary: Lori knows why the Governor wanted her on the Five-0 Task Force. But she's not playing his game; she's spending most of her time with Max instead. He makes Hawaii feel like home.
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eviinsanemonkey February 19 2012, 23:52:00 UTC
aw, this is really sweet. I love it!

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 08:33:38 UTC
Thank you :) I always thought they were very sweet together and should have gotten more of scenes together. Thanks for reading & commenting :)

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huntress69 February 20 2012, 02:05:55 UTC
I enjoyed this, and they are a cute couple, aren't they? Thanks for writing it. And you might want to post it at hawaii5_o_het. (ETA: Can you send them both my way as I would love to have somebody to watch Blakes 7 with.)

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 08:37:07 UTC
I'll definitely post it to the het comm :) Glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, it would be awesome to watch Blake's 7 with them :)

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indigocat February 20 2012, 02:12:05 UTC
I wish they had made Lori and Max a couple on the show. Loved the fic.

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 08:38:19 UTC
I wish they had too! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

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kaitou_lili February 20 2012, 14:04:26 UTC
Aww! This is delightful. I've only seen the show once, but I don't need to have seen it to love this. You build such a beautiful world between the two when you highlight everyone's hidden dimensions. It's so lovely!

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 14:08:13 UTC
Awww thanks darling. What a lovely thing to say :) I wasn't sure how this fic would be recieved as Lori isn't loved by a huge chunk of the fandom. But I adored her scenes with Max and decided that she must be a lot more than what we saw of her. Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot.

PS You should check out more of the show, just for the Danny/Steve. It's epic and awesome :) xoxo <3

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kaitou_lili February 20 2012, 14:16:31 UTC
It's definitely on my list of shows to check out! And hearing a positive recommendation about it from you makes me want to watch it even more.

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 14:18:09 UTC
It's a really fun show and the main characters are all brilliant. I hope you enjoy it, especially now I've recommended it :)

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smiley_b February 20 2012, 18:57:59 UTC
This was absolutely lovely! Wish we'd seen more of them together on the show :-)

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funkyinfishnet February 20 2012, 21:20:16 UTC
Wish we'd seen more of them together on the show

Me too! They would have been an awesome pairing and should have been given more shared screen time. Thanks for your kind words, glad you liked the fic :)

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