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Fic: Because the Night (Belongs to Monsters) (Primeval, PG)

Jan 20, 2011 17:27

Title: Because the Night (Belongs to Monsters)
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Captain Becker
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Series 4. Talk of canonical deaths.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, I promise.
Summary: Becker has to keep them safe. It's his job and he's failed too many times. It's not going to happen again.

( He’d come round a day later and Lester had been the only familiar solemn face in the room. )

primeval, fic

Comments 26

knitekat January 21 2011, 00:50:45 UTC

Meep, poor Becker. This is so vivid and a brilliant look inside stressed-out Becker's head.

funkyinfishnet January 23 2011, 22:27:47 UTC

Why thank you. I feel so sorry for him. Clearly he needs someone to set his straight. Glad you liked.

jooles34 January 21 2011, 00:54:05 UTC

Oh devistating. Poor Becker. Some fabulous lines and thoughts in this.

funkyinfishnet January 23 2011, 22:28:06 UTC

Yay, glad you thought some of it was fabulous :) Thanks for reading.

quoththewriter January 21 2011, 01:30:50 UTC

What a brilliant look inside Becker's head! The poor boy's definitely suffered a lot this series and I can definitely sense his desperation to keep the rest of them safe here. Lovely work!

funkyinfishnet January 23 2011, 22:29:34 UTC

Thanks so much. Your kind words mean a lot :)

nietie January 21 2011, 13:32:27 UTC

This is brilliant and vivid. This is what Becker must feel like. Poor man.

funkyinfishnet January 23 2011, 22:31:17 UTC

Thank you. I feel so sorry for him. He needs a hug :)

renne January 22 2011, 00:45:18 UTC

*chinhands* This is a lovely look at his epic manpain, I love it.

funkyinfishnet January 23 2011, 22:32:27 UTC

Epic manpain is right. I try not to laugh at the emoness of it all. So I kinda went somewhere dark with it since he's bound to feel that way.