Comments | funbot: FIC: Camera Shy (Jim/Michael gen, PG, 1400 words)

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FIC: Camera Shy (Jim/Michael gen, PG, 1400 words)

Aug 02, 2006 18:35

Title: Camera Shy
Author: funbot
Pairing: Jim/Michael gen
Rating: PG
Length: 1400 words
Summary: Jim and Michael chatting at Chili's

( Jim keeps looking over at Pam, but she's not there. )

Comments 18

annakovsky August 3 2006, 22:44:28 UTC

Oh MAN, your Michael is so fantastic. His dry-cleaned jeans, and his sad patheticness, and him saying things aren't awesome anymore. Just excellent.

Pulling away those interviews without any warning was like being dumped by a therapist.

NICE.

funbot August 4 2006, 02:06:26 UTC

Thanks! I had fun with this. And thanks for the awesome community.

hobviously August 13 2006, 00:01:37 UTC

This is so perfect - with the awesome blossoms and the glassy abyss and the Munder-Difflin. And Michael is so sorry for Pam, because she's just so...hot. It, just, oh. Can't sentence properly! Looove.

funbot August 13 2006, 19:44:58 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

nm973 September 12 2006, 05:58:23 UTC

This is great. Your Michael was perfect, and I love the idea of Jim doing a talking head as a message to Pam. You know the cameramen were rooting for these two!

funbot September 12 2006, 11:29:20 UTC

Hey, thanks!

falsifiability January 20 2007, 00:54:10 UTC

I'm working my way back through old Office fics, and I had to comment because this is just great. The dialogue is fantastic. And I love the hope at the end!

"You have to come back," says Michael. "It just isn't awesome anymore without you."

hahaha. awww, Michael.

funbot January 22 2007, 01:35:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.