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fumiyo92

The Piece of My Heart (6/10)

Feb 19, 2011 08:53

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Normal POV

“Aah… he’s really cute you know. He even cuter than Taeminie…”

“Really?” she looks at her surprised. He even cuter than Taemin? Taemin is the cutest boy that she had seen in her whole life. How can this boy be cuter than him?

Krystal nodded her head rapidly, “You know that I really weak with a cute things right?” she ( Read more... )

!fic: the piece of my heart, onkey fanfiction, side pairing: jongtae, rating: pg-13, length: chaptered, side pairing: minstal, pairing: onkey

Comments 16

7myunghee February 19 2011, 04:49:50 UTC

Aa~~~the best chapter...
Jinki confession...hehe...
More Onkey...Love it..
But Hyorin...Aishh..I just want to kill that girl..
I can feel it she like Jinki,right????

BTW,I love this chapter *claping*..
I'll wait for the next update..

fumiyo92 February 20 2011, 08:51:26 UTC

thank you for loving it ^^

2ne1generation February 19 2011, 05:26:35 UTC

Haha jinki confessed...
Btw hyorin is one jealous person..

fumiyo92 February 20 2011, 08:51:58 UTC

Yea, she is!! kekeke

melalocket February 19 2011, 05:56:53 UTC

love this!!!
kheekekekeke~

that hyorin!!!
ugh!! why he saying that to kibumie!!!
huh ...

omoooo jinki confess his feeling to kibumie >.<
omo omo omo <3 <3

fumiyo92 February 20 2011, 08:52:57 UTC

thank you for loving it ^^

rinni1905 February 19 2011, 11:53:44 UTC

I have the feeling that Hyorin liked Jinki so that she tried to confront Kibum and ruin OnKey. Gosh, she was so evil, hurting Jinki's wifey like that. I decided to dislike her, I hope Krystal wouldn't deal with Hyorin's bitching. She was quite cute in here, and I know why Minho liked her. Keke. I have the fetish for cute things too, and yup, I think Kibum is cuter than Taemin, he just didn't show it much. I think the evil maknae is more suitable with Taemin, he is cute in a wicked way, hope you could understand me. Keke.

Aigoo, finally, Jinki confessed. I hope you would add more drama to strengthen their love, since I think it was a bit too fast. But I really appreciate your effort to giving this fic a lot of detail and I really like it. I hope I could read the next chap soon, but don't rush yourself too much. Fighting!

fumiyo92 February 20 2011, 08:54:03 UTC

the drama will begin on the next chapter~~ kekeke
I'll update it next week ^^

jhea76 February 19 2011, 14:27:20 UTC

Ughh and what's going with hyorin she's just there to start ruin between Jinki and Kibum but atleast Jinki confessed to Kibum..

Will wait for the next chapter..
I'm excited on how will turn out between Jinki and Kibum..
<3
:D

fumiyo92 February 20 2011, 08:55:24 UTC

I'll update it next week ^^