An Act of Dominance [Part Four]

[fullmoonsyn]

Title: An Act of Dominance

Comments

[onhoing]

SMH AT JINKI'S PARENTS OMG >.> they're making poor Jinkibaby's life difficult :c Anywaaaaay, Kibum's right! Jinki has Minho now OuO Hopefully, they get to the part where Minho pounds Jinki into the mattress til he can't walk soon! asdfghjkl *q* lol Thanks for updating bb! :*

[fullmoonsyn]

lol it's really just his mom I think, though I don't know, haven't really written his dad too much have I? I suppose I have no one to blame but myself lol Here's hoping there's a mattress around so that can happen ;) Thanks for reading as always, love!

[sabrina165]

Sorry about your computer. Thanks for updating.

[fullmoonsyn]

T.T as am I, and it isn't even salvageable waaeeee! I'll have to figure something out so I can update soon! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! It really means a lot to me!

[hwan_sang]

Aww, Jinki just can't catch a break can he. You can't get Minho out of your head bb? Come join the club :D

And Minho's being insecure... Come on, man up Minho, you're an alpha! Key's right, try harder!! MAKE him yours XD

I seriously love your dialogue, so so SO much!

"By the way, do his parents know that the only reason you're helping them out is so that you can fuck their son and inevitably turn him from girls for the rest of his life?"

"Do I look stupid to you?"

"Do you want me to answer that?" XDDDDDDDD

Love, love, LOVE IT! I feel like shit is gonna go down when Minho catches up to Jinki, and I can't wait! Love you! (lots) ^^

p.s. I see you got that counter working :D

[fullmoonsyn]

haha I know right? Even us MVPs have Minho fever, sometimes. Okay, all the time. Just SHINee fever in general. But if this is a sickness, I don't ever want to be cured ;P

hehe thanks! I love the dialogue too! Key always makes things fun whenever I write him into stories! Jjong, too!

hehe luvs ya too! And it was all thanks to you! Seriously, thanks again! You're an utter genius! I bow to your greatness!

[chansai_unmyong]

OMG... why cut it at the smut part?! LMAO.. just kidding.. cant wait for OnHo's encounter again.. and where is dubu, btw?

PS: haven't thought about the outlier in a sentence thing... im having a hard time using it in a longer phrase.. LMAO...

[fullmoonsyn]

hehe you know me, cock blocking all of you! Oh Onew, you know, he's arounndddd lol

I KNOW! You gave me a hard word! I might just have to change the title but still call them outliers in the story T.T

[a_k_k_h_n]

my god it's been yonks since I've read some of your godly stuff ! I am so glad I came across this when I was having a break form studying <3
Poor jinki :( god his mum sounds like a bit of a control freak!

[fullmoonsyn]

:D thank you! I'm glad you're back and have a break! Studying can suck sometimes lol

Yeahhh his mom's a little cray cray lol but hopefully things will get better for our Jinki! thanks for the comment!