[FIC] Taking a Chance [late ROUND TWO]

[hpsauce]

Title: Taking a Chance
Artist: hpsauce
Characters/Pairings: Remus/Sirius, Teddy/OMC
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 42. Teddy grows up and falls in love w/guy but is an insecure teen so Remus and Sirius visit (in dreams or as ghosts or whatever) and tell him their story.
A/N I am very sorry for how late this is. And I want to thank neko_myka who has been very patient with

Comments

[harwhon]

I positively adore your Sirius. He's amazing and funny and exactly as I imagine how he would be.

And our lovely Remus- isn't he just the best?

So much love for this fic. So. Much.

♥

[hpsauce]

Ah, you do insist on loving Sirius, don't you? ;) I'm glad that mine lived up to your expectations.
And, yes, you have got to love Remus. There's no other choice. He's just darling.

Glad it could bring about such love from you. These things mean such a lot coming from you because I do adore you and your writing.

*snuggles*

[harwhon]

Aww- you're just the sweetest! I haven't written anything half-decent in ages, let alone that you'd still remember it :D

But this just was a really good fic. Good writing deserves applauding and this was more than just good. I always have the feeling that your Sirius is exactly the right amount of crazy, silly and loving- a loose canon with a good heart. (Not that your Remus is rubbish, far from it, but you've such a knack for writing Sirius. You just get him in every single way.)

I'm not so much into the HP-fandom anymore, but for your fic, I gladly return.

♥

[pperthinhymn]

This is adorable. Well done!♥~! :)

[hpsauce]

Thank you *grins*

[spamala97]

Awwww. This was so cute! I loved how Sirius kept having to change the things he was saying.

(as in

"She was a good one. Very pretty. She liked it when I-," Remus shot him a blazing look and he smiled, "-helped her with her Arithmancy."

and

"-cook. He used to make the best casserole. It helped that he never wore his robes in the kitchen."

:D)

Just one thing, though, if it's alright---I think there may be a typo in this sentence:

"Dad," he said. "I'm on love."

Heh, sorry.

[hpsauce]

Hee. They just came in the flow of my mind. It seemed to make sense. My Sirius can be a little obscene - but he knows better than to say such things in front of 'little Teddy'.

Hey, thanks for pointing out the typo. My typing skills have never been the best in the world.

*smiles*
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[liveonthesun]

"Dad," he said. "I'm on love."

Didn't you hear? 'Love' is the new term for heroin.

Sorry. I couldn't resist. :D

[spamala97]

Haha.

"This is your brain. This is your brain on love."

[flo_cleo]

My prompt!!!!
omg you did it sooooooo great! I loved it.
Josie," Sirius said. "She was a good one. Very pretty. She liked it when I-," Remus shot him a blazing look and he smiled, "-helped her with her Arithmancy."
Best line evr
And I loved Sirius sulking!!!
Anyway, great job!!

[hpsauce]

Yay! Thanks for making up the prompt - I loved it. It made me all fluffy inside. I'm glad you liked it! Its always a little worrying when you think about the prompters - in case you write it wrong. I'm happy that wasn't the case.

(by the way, love the icon, scorpius is adorable)

[liveonthesun]

OMG, I loved this! There were so many little things that made me laugh! The whole story was just adorable. Thanks for writing it. :D