If living is without you [ROUND TWO] [FIC]

Nov 03, 2007 21:23

Title: If living is without you.
Author: loveliesfamous
Pairing: Tonks/Remus implied; Remus/Sirius.
Rating: PG-15+.
Prompt: 62. AU: Remus refuses to fight now the only thing he was fighting to protect is gone.

'Tonks?' 'Tonks.' Harry nods, 'Your wife?' )

round: two, a: loveliesfamous, m: fanfiction

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chiralove November 3 2007, 21:53:00 UTC
Oh, wow ... this is so fabulous.

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pperthinhymn November 3 2007, 22:10:18 UTC
Thank you <3
I'm glad you liked it :)

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batmanboxers November 3 2007, 21:56:07 UTC
Oh god, that was just so... so heartbreaking actually.

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pperthinhymn November 3 2007, 22:10:59 UTC
Actually, when I started, I didn't intend it to be too angsty. But I guess it just turned out that way. Sorry >_>;

Thank you so much for reading <3

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rising_lark November 3 2007, 21:58:22 UTC
You broke my heart with this. *sobs*
“Everyone in my family has the same eyes.”

She tries to calm her heart rate, to tell herself she’s imagining it. But his muscles tighten and he nods.

“I know.”
Especially loved this place.

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pperthinhymn November 3 2007, 22:11:16 UTC
Thank you so much <33 :)

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pperthinhymn November 3 2007, 22:11:54 UTC
I'm sorry! I shall write something unashamedly cute now, to make up :)
Thank you so much for reading <3

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taigne November 3 2007, 22:20:05 UTC
Wow, that was kind of awful, in a really fantastic gut-wrenching way. I love how the little snippets each showed so much. And I never say this, but poor Tonks. But mostly poor Remus. Brilliant stuff.

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pperthinhymn November 3 2007, 22:27:47 UTC
Thank you so much. Every now and again I like to let my angsty side shine through, somehow.
I'm really glad you liked it <33

And, also, that's my favourite thing about the 'little snippet' style. It leaves a lot upto the reader ;p :)

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