It’s Not That We’re Broken, Just Bent and Slightly Frayed

Jun 12, 2013 22:02

Author: tryslora
Title: It’s Not That We’re Broken, Just Bent and Slightly Frayed
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Stiles/Jackson
Character/s: Stiles, Lydia
Summary: They only just started to be friends. Now that things are public with Stiles and Jackson, is his friendship with Lydia irretrievably broken?
Warnings: mpreg, AU post season 2, offscreen implied ( Read more... )

c:stiles stilinski, p:jackson/stiles, pt 22:broken, type:fic, c:lydia martin, *c:tryslora, rating:pg-13

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on_the_ground June 13 2013, 17:31:02 UTC
This was lots of fun. I was very curious about Lydias' reaction so I agree that this was a part that had to be written. You made an awesome job writing their voices and I think that Stiles had to be more difficult to write because he's in a very difficult position since he doesn't want to hurt Lyida but at the same time he can't let her tell him everything she wants and blame him for her break-up. I also liked how you ended their argument, they're really gonna need friends. Great job :D Thank you! :)

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tryslora June 13 2013, 19:00:08 UTC
Someone suggested that Lydia would be a good response to the Broken prompt, so I went with it, and it came out totally different than I expected. I just sort of let the characters run with it and did my best to keep up... the end was hard for me, because I wanted to find a good note and punchy ending, but it does sort of just... end. But I like where they are. And I think Lydia's still pretty broken here. :( Thanks!

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tryslora June 14 2013, 02:33:31 UTC
Thank you! I can't see Lydia letting something take control of her life if she can avoid it, y'know?

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tryslora June 14 2013, 11:17:42 UTC
Thank you! And oh yes, definitely work to be done, and all under these extraordinary circumstances. And Lydia is very observant when things concern her. :) What she didn't question is "how" which she'll work on later. When she has time to think about how it doesn't make any actual sense!

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