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Fic: it's only nature, I live for danger || NC-17 || Stiles/Derek

May 27, 2017 03:18

Author: marishna
Title: it's only nature, I live for danger
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/s: Stiles/Derek
Character/s: Stiles, Derek
Summary: One could say it smacked Stiles in the face but, in actuality, it was Derek slapping him on the ass with a wide grin and laughing eyes that gave him the epiphany.
Warnings: Spanking/light BDSM
Content Notes: n/a
Submission ( Read more... )

c:stiles stilinski, c:derek hale, rating:nc-17, *c:marishna, pt 225: slap, type:fic, p:derek/stiles

Comments 2

simplyn2deep May 27 2017, 14:43:45 UTC

And they've discovered something to leave them both satisfied.

ext_3986496 May 27 2017, 15:54:28 UTC

Yowza! That was hot! I love the slow build and the fact that Derek can take some of the pain away (until Stiles tells him to stop) is an intriguing possibility for future limit pushing (rrooOOWWwwwrr). This is a great first time spank story for them. I can see both/either of them as dom or sub, but Stiles sort of topping from the bottom works really well here to get Derek on the same page. Yay! \o/
only thing I noticed is, at one point you have Derek kiss Stiles' ass while Stiles is laying over his lap. Unless Derek is extraordinarily flexible, I don't think that's possible. It would be like him trying to suck himself. Which can be done -- I've seen those porns -- but those guys are laying on their backs/shoulders with their hips curled over them, letting gravity help; they're not sitting upright like Derek.