and in this nothingness, between [Allison, gen]

[espressopotluck]

Author: espressopotluck
Title: and in this nothingness, between
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: none
Character/s: Allison, Chris [Victoria]
Summary: Maybe she should begin a new method of keeping track of the stages of her life: before her mother's death, and after it.
Warnings: Canon character death
Word Count: 656
Prompt: #9 - Silence
Author's Notes: Allison is not a

Comments

[espressopotluck]

that's exactly what i was going for here. i think i want to write allison off as being this villain, but i really wanted to get into her head because this is a 16-year-old girl who lost someone she loved very much. thanks so much for your wonderful feedback, i'm really happy that you felt this worked! ♥

[tryslora]

Beautifully done.

[espressopotluck]

thank you very much! :)

[ledernieramant]

Not bad at all. Fun read.

[espressopotluck]

haha thanks :)

[halesmoon]

This is beautifully written. I think Allison is a fascinating and complicated character, and she's lost everything, and I think you wrote her perfectly. The last few lines are heartbreaking.

[espressopotluck]

thanks so much for reading, i'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)

[blue_emotion]

This is beautiful and heartbreaking. The death of Victoria is such a huge thing that I think often gets overlooked in light of the events that followed it.

[espressopotluck]

i think so, too! and it was certainly huge for allison, so i'm very glad that people are enjoying this. thanks so much! :)