The Million Pieces of His Heart

[laraflame]

Author: laraF laraflame
Title: The Million Pieces of His Heart
Rating: PG-13
Character/s: Peter Hale, members of the Hale family mentioned
Summary: “The constant burn of his cells as his body mended itself; the slowly piercing sensation of agony reminded him of fireworks crackling under his skin

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The Million Pieces of His Heart

[koshweasley]

I like seeing Peter before all the really craziness he evolved into. He's still Peter, but he had his moments.

Last two lines - perfectly Peter. Well done.

Re: The Million Pieces of His Heart

[laraflame]

Right? Peter's a fascinating asshole. And I think he's excellent fiction-material.

Aww, thank you! *blushes*
Cute icon, btw :)