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brimstone [derek, laura, peter]

Feb 27, 2013 02:03

Author: espressopotluck
Title: brimstone
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: none
Character/s: Derek Hale, Laura Hale, Peter Hale
Summary: They are nothing but barely glowing embers now.
Warnings: Angst, descriptions of being burned to death, language
Word Count: 515
Prompt: 07 - Fire
Author's Notes: Some loose interpretations and guesstimations taken with characters' ages ( Read more... )

*c:espressopotluck, c:derek hale, c:peter hale, pt 07:fire, c:laura hale, rating:pg-13

Comments 5

brightredhoodie February 27 2013, 03:56:03 UTC

I thought I commented on this already, but it doesn't seem to have showed up (or maybe I forgot to sign in). Anyway, this fic is wonderful and torturous. You just... broke me apart with this which is impressive considering it's so short. This is really good! I could seem them all reacting this way to the huge tragedy of losing their family.

espressopotluck February 27 2013, 04:11:04 UTC

aw, thanks so much! ♥ i don't even know where this came from, but it's such a big, twisting, awful thing that happened that i guess it tugged on my fingers hahaha. your comment made me smile!!

brightredhoodie February 27 2013, 04:15:39 UTC

That is something I love about this series, honestly. You can kind of do anything with the characters. There's enough tragedy and drama that you can write things like this, but at the same time you can write total fluff, too.

jonjokeat March 2 2013, 19:16:56 UTC

Heartbreaking and very vivid.

espressopotluck March 3 2013, 07:35:47 UTC

thanks so much! ♥