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I Still Want To Marry You (But there's one small problem) PART 1 [Puck/Sam]

Jul 22, 2011 18:31

Title: I Still Want To Marry You (But there's one small problem)
Autor: fuelledbydecay
Pairing: Puck/Sam
POV: 3rd person
Rating: PG
Warning: Slash, swearing
Spoilers: None that I can think of
Summary: He half-hopes that he imagines the disappointment in Puck’s eyes. Puck doesn’t mention it again.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the charcters. Show belongs ( Read more... )

slash, fandom: glee

Comments 6

david_of_oz July 23 2011, 06:28:19 UTC

Great stuff! Really really nicely done. Took me a moment to work out how to comment - there's no comment link at the end of this part, so I went hunting and clicked on the pencil to see what that did (I'm kind of an anti-nerd). Hoping you keep writing this. I had to re-read "Marry Me" - it's been a while since you posted that. So I like the tone you use for Sam's inner voice, and that Puck recklessness kind of captures the teenage side of Puck so well.

If you're looking for more detailed feedback let me know. Also, maybe put a comment link in at the end of the story - just to make it easier for people to tell you what they think.
Cheers. David.

david_of_oz August 3 2011, 07:34:01 UTC

I just rad this again. I like it THAT much. Please give us moar soon. :) <33333

asm613 August 20 2011, 16:09:11 UTC

(there's no comment link at the end of this part, so I went hunting and clicked on the pencil to see what that did)

i had the same problem- you are not alone. people have started using images instead of words everywhere it seems.

aussiegirl411 July 23 2011, 15:25:56 UTC

Aww poor Sammy having to deal with asshole parents. He should just live with Puck and his awesome mum ^_^
So happy that you updated :D Looking forward to the next part

fuelledbydecay July 24 2011, 23:39:56 UTC

I know. I have a soft spot for Puck's mum. I don't even know why. She is all kinds of awesome!
Thanks, it took me a while but I'm glad you liked it
:D

WELL DONE asm613 August 20 2011, 16:01:09 UTC

a great mix of humor and emotion- this part of the story has definitely taken on a more serious tone than the previous part. i enjoy sam's internal dialogs. the bit where sam met puck's mother and the warm greeting and the conversation, etc- all well written and enjoyed. we really learn a lot about sam in this story.