Comments | fuelledbydecay: Love's Not A Competition (But I'm Winning) [4/6]

fuelledbydecay

Love's Not A Competition (But I'm Winning) [4/6]

Jul 20, 2010 23:23

( Well I won't be the one to disappoint you, anymore )

Comments 5

aholelabledlove July 20 2010, 23:49:23 UTC

The way you write the boys is amazing, you capture even the smallest feelings Ryan has. The way they all interact, the way Ryan sees them, beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter.

fuelledbydecay July 21 2010, 12:22:02 UTC

Thank you so much :) I'm really glad you like it so far :D

aholelabledlove July 22 2010, 01:05:00 UTC

You're very welcome!

silveryxdark July 21 2010, 13:25:54 UTC

Oh yes, I liked this very much. I really like how it wasn't all "YAY LET'S BE TOGETHER" or something, instead it's very realistic. The confusion and turmoil that Ryan feels is all very well described, and I like the way you introduced Pete and Tom. ^^

fuelledbydecay July 22 2010, 09:32:41 UTC

Thank you Regina! :D I'm glad you like it. I really didn't want to turn it into a sappy fic where they suddenly jump into a relationship. It would have made the build up a little anti-climatic. Tom is my favourite in this fic, even though he isn't really in it.

I LOVE YOU :D