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Invisible Pain

Jun 16, 2011 02:35

Title: Invisible Pain (3/?)
Author: his_angel16
Pairing: Jaejin/Wonbin, onesided!Jaejin/Hongki
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG
Summary: Jaejin always hid his feelings. When he confessed, he had a chance of changing his words as if he had never spoken them. Now, all he can do is wonder if he had chosen right.

( Minhwan reached up to his cheek, it red and tingling from the hit. He felt tears well in his eyes at being hit by his hyung. “You…you hit me.” )

author: h, rating: pg, pairing: jaejin/wonbin, pairing: hongki/jaejin

Comments 4

pink_forever13 June 22 2011, 13:31:51 UTC

wonbin is soo sweet~~~
i felt bad for him and hongki T T
omo...jaejin just hit minhwan...i didn't even saw that coming
love the kiss at the end~
you update pretty fast~ thank u ^ ^

his_angel16 June 22 2011, 17:06:45 UTC

I feel bad for them, too! Haha. ^^ Thanks for reading and commenting. <3 I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. I've already started writing it so it's only a matter of time before I get it posted. ^^

pink_forever13 June 29 2011, 12:08:18 UTC

i can't wait to read it but you can take you're time if you want to ^ ^

anonymous June 24 2011, 17:17:38 UTC

I can't help it but keep reading the chapters over and over again >< I really like this story ^^ Hope you can update chapter 4 soon ;) Goodluck ^^