untitled [Prince of Tennis: Tezuka/Fuji, Sanada/Yukimura, Yanagi, Echizen, Tachibana, Kirihara]

[fsop]

fandom: Prince Of Tennis
pairing(s)/characters: Tezuka/Fuji, Sanada/Yukimura, Yanagi, Echizen, Tachibana, Kirihara.
prompt: "I never knew my journey began, And ended with you my friend, Softer than your butterfly kisses, And stronger than my desire, I wanna thank you my friend, For making me feel alive." - What You Like, Darren Hayes
notes: 5564

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[vacivity]

For my reference, for later, some of my favorite lines:

"I didn't let it hit you in the face." He says.

"I'm sorry..." Yukimura says coldly, "Did you just say that defeat was acceptable?"

"Even if I was calm about it, it wouldn't make you lose it." Sanada says almost sulkily. It makes Yukimura smile a little, despite everything.

[vacivity]

Okay, to explain why I liked those lines. :D

"I didn't let it hit you in the face." He says. The vaguely!evil streak in Yukimura makes me giggle so much! It borders on being playful and blunt all at once and just showing off to Sanada like that amuses me. And it is a good point he makes there. :D

"I'm sorry..." Yukimura says coldly, "Did you just say that defeat was acceptable?" This is Yukimura. And to me, Yukimura has always been Rikkai. This is what philosophy he has toward everything, especially tennis. Defeat is not acceptable - "we will always win" as compared to "we will never lose" (there is a difference, even if it's slight, and not just in the wording, but in the way you hold those promises true) not to Yukimura, and he believes it should apply to the rest of the team. I love the way you write him.

"Even if I was calm about it, it wouldn't make you lose it." Sanada says almost sulkily. It makes Yukimura smile a little, despite everything. Sanada! A sulky child. Yukimura always calm even when he's facing the scary and

[mlina]

We don't know each other, but I journal-hopped from Cyn's LJ and I just wanted to say that I am officially inlove with the way you've written Rikkai here. The interaction between Yukimura and Sanada is wonderful, and I'm sort of beside myself, if that makes any sense.

Having said that, would it be alright by you if I added this journal to my flist? :3 *is still trying to compose a coherent comment but is failing very badly*

[fsop]

Hi! :D

This was the first time I attempted Rikkai; at the moment between myself and Cyn we're trying to do a little prompt table all based on Rikkai, so there will be more soon hopefully! :)

Thank you for the kind words :* and I'm going to add you right NOW!

[mlina]

*hearts* Yay~ I'll be keeping watch for that, eitherway. :)