Yamaguchi-Anti-Cupid [Gokusen: Kumiko/Shin, Noda/Fujiyama]

[fsop]

title: Yamaguchi-Anti-Cupid
fandom: Gokusen
characters: Yamaguchi Kumiko(/)Sawada Shin, Noda Takeshi(/)Fujiyama Shizuka, and others.
rating: pg-13 or something.
summary: Noda is working his way towards a date with Fujiyama-sensei, Yankumi is working at being the ultimate anti-Cupid, and Shin is just wishing he wasn't caught up in the whole mess (as

Comments

[aliaspiral]

YAY! Yankumi is so completely stubborn, and Shin veers between annoyed, hopeful, and insecure, just like he should be in this situation. I love that Ryuichiro is fine with Shin's feelings, and even tries to help.

Shin flops back in his seat and through a veil of bitterness prays that Noda at least gets some

HEE! i love this line!

[fsop]

Shin is just as much a dork as Yankumi, most of the time ;) When he's not being angsty or a smart-ass, anyway! I totally think Ryuichiro would be cool; he's always talking about the useless youth of today, but he doesn't think Shin is one of them :)

RE: that line; I always start off well, it's the ending I stress about!

I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway :)

[anenko]

Cool! Don't have time to read right now, but I'll be back with feedback at some point.

[fsop]

I look forward to it; I will be happy even if only you and aliaspiral read it! ;)

(And of course vacivity who commented over G!Talk and so hasn't commented. I mustn't leave her out!)