Why I'm Not Where You Are [Gokusen, girl!au]

Jan 01, 2009 23:11

title: Why I'm Not Where You Are
fandom: Gokusen
wordcount: 429
prompt: vacivity and I wrote a JDramas fanfic wishlist between us. And I decided to try my hand at something from it!: I still want 3D as girls fic. With lots of nice lovely femslash moments. :D. 31_days, 4 November 2005.
notes: This is set in an Alternate Universe - Class 3D are all GIRLS. That ( Read more... )

wordcount:101-500, universe:girl!au, type:gen, fandom:gokusen

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vacivity January 1 2009, 23:15:36 UTC
The last line is perfect! I just love the implications of it.

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fsop January 1 2009, 23:17:50 UTC
That's why I stopped there!

Not because I had no idea where it was going and no plot and it ran away from me soon after I started writing and took on a completely different turn!

Because I MEANT TO! ;D

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vacivity January 1 2009, 23:20:43 UTC
Of course. It is a good ending? ;)

Fics like to do that to you. It's just lurking there in the back of your mind, waiting to come out.

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anenko January 2 2009, 01:16:55 UTC
I agree, the last line is *excellent.*

I admit I had a bit of trouble wrapping my head around the pronouns, but I'd *love* to see more from this universe.

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fsop January 2 2009, 18:24:28 UTC
The amount of times I almost wrote HE. Nearly everytime!

Usually, when I write girl!verse, I tend to give them girl's names similar to their original names, to keep things a bit clearer, so perhaps if I continue, I'll do that :)

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