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Encounter 24 posted and Encounter 25 is almost done

Sep 23, 2014 19:49

Encounter Chapter 24 is online and Encounter 25 is almost done. I'm editing it and still have to type it before I can post it (probably at the end of this week). I think I've caught the writing bug from SN and am now writing like a maniac again. My new notebook is almost full and I wonder whether I should give up the iPad in the future because ( Read more... )

encounter in venice (new version), update

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fs_playground September 23 2014, 19:24:21 UTC

Yep. We are all in a productive phase. :)

Well, here goes, anonymous September 24 2014, 06:22:44 UTC

I wonder how many text I can put here, but I'll try, and possibly post more of my rambling - hope you don't mind
(FF net didn't look to me like the right place...)

I realy hope you don't mind, though...

anonymous September 24 2014, 06:25:59 UTC

Brilliant, as soon as I posted the whole lot (2 pages), the site jumped to Israelian mode...

Í will try again (distributing my comments/ musings)

Raksha

Here goes anonymous September 24 2014, 06:26:40 UTC

I would like to take up your offer to PM you on your blog, hope you don’t mind (probably Roflol when reading my musings ( ... )

Re: Here goes fs_playground September 24 2014, 09:32:05 UTC

Btw there is a little misunderstanding. In the last chapter, Alan didn't say it was Seiya who killed the men. He thought it in the beginning but when Seiya denied the accusation, he quickly adapted and thought that Seiya wouldn't have lied just to gain the moral upper hand. So he most probably didn't kill the men at all or lied about it for some other reason.

Re: Here goes - thanks for the comment(s) anonymous September 24 2014, 11:36:56 UTC

True, totally my assumptions.

I was jumpint to conclusions (that's why I'm not a detective anyway). But with what I recall from the story (I didn't have it in front of me when writing this), it would have been very convenient (the rest of his behaviour would fit in)

but never mind - I'm perfectly fine (usually) with lurking in the shadows (a reason why I don't do accounts offen - take up time and memory for passwords :)).

Re: Here goes - thanks for the comment(s) fs_playground September 24 2014, 14:06:27 UTC

Alright. Feel free to lurk then. ;)

and again (seems to work) anonymous September 24 2014, 06:27:08 UTC

I can’t imagine that Haruka meant the correspondence issue, when Shiho confronted her when she found out who was answering her mailing - as something Seiya or Kudo might not be able to forgive (sorry, can’t scroll to the chapter for the exact phrasing, just now). What Haruka is holding in that scene, might be a memory card or something, like she is bribing Shiho (or might have been all along for something, but not as adamant as appearing now, from the scene/ flashback ( ... )