3 sets & 15 to love | yoosu, yunjae | one-shot

Oct 03, 2010 01:59

Title: 3 sets & 15 to love
Length: 1/?
Author: fruityfruitcake
Genre: comedy | fluff | romance
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Yoosu | Yunjae
Warning(s): none! ^^
Synopsis: Love will play with your heart, confuse your mind, and throw you into a whirl of emotions you can’t seem to comprehend. After the hardships and battles we’ve fought, what are we left with ( Read more... )

g: k-pop, f: 3 sets & 15 to ♥, b: dong bang shin ki, p: yoosu

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tvxqforeverlove October 3 2010, 23:38:16 UTC
OMFGLOL.

this fic is so fucking FANTASTIC already. I was spaz!laughing ALL OVER THE PLACE.

and when jaejoong said that the chest move wasn't good for yunho's moobies OMFGLOL. the whole aadbsk3 volleyball game was hillarious. you took it and made it fucking EPIC. 8DDD I was half-expecting junsu to go "oh my god, SUN"

I cannot wait for the next chapter! -turns into a rabid flamingo-

p.s. lol, 2U = uneducated lazy ass bum-lings X'DDDD

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tvxqforeverlove October 3 2010, 23:40:43 UTC
oh, and junsu's "butt meets ball" move was the highlight of my life.

you are one impressive person. :3

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fruityfruitcake October 4 2010, 02:59:30 UTC
GDI. Best comment I've seen all day. Ever. THANK YOU. LOL.

Even though it was short, it took me for freaking ever just to type that shit out. XD

Lmao I had to shove certain references in, lol. That's how I see them playing a game in my mind and omfg I should have shoved in OMGSun. Damn, ROFL. I think my Su muse in here isn't as bubbly and happy (yet). 8)

Thanks for reading and giving a good comment. X)

Highlight of my day. Lol.

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fruityfruitcake October 4 2010, 03:00:26 UTC
and yes, uneducated lazy ass bum-lings who ain't lazy but fun bums. XD

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drtrypanophobic October 4 2010, 03:18:50 UTC
ADKSFHJSK!

let me spazz over the epicness that is the volleyball game XD
Su's missile!butt move made me ROFL in rl. Yoochun's forehead is so huge it practically has an invisible X mark saying 'land here!'

AND OMG MY JAE BEING HIS GAG!TEAM BIAS. i loved it in AADBSK3 and its so so hilarious reading it here. butthurt yunho shall be butthurt. i love yunjae's relationship. jae isn't always fawning over yunho.

all i have to say is.

i. need. moar! ♥

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fruityfruitcake October 4 2010, 03:43:23 UTC
IA with your comment so hard. ♥

Lmao thank you! I hope I continue getting feedback on the game because that's the main focus of this chapter! LMFAO OMG missile!butt shot. That is so much better than the assinator. GDI. LOL yes, land hit me here! That's genius. XD

LOL I couldn't help it! I needed to reference those things. Plus my friends and I have been playing beach volley like practically every week during the summer and I told my friend that I'd write a fic based on the crap that we did. (Obviously there were certain moves we couldn't do, rofl!).

But yeah I think my readers will see soon that my Jaejoong muse isn't clingy but rather independent and takes no shit from no one. X)

You.Will.Get.Moar! ^^

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fruityfruitcake October 4 2010, 07:20:39 UTC
I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for reading. ^^~!

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chixmartini October 4 2010, 22:28:01 UTC
Hello! Congrats on your first fic at Yoosu ^^ so far so good! it's really funny, specially the volleyball game and Jae's bias to the gag team! (love his character in here btw, a tougher Jae!) I hope to read more!!! ^^

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fruityfruitcake October 5 2010, 02:43:19 UTC
Hey hun and thank you. ^^/ LOL As loveable and fun the YunJae sounds it's YooSu all the way here! o@_@o Of course my Jae muse is always tough! :DD

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chixmartini October 9 2010, 02:13:56 UTC
fruityfruitcake October 9 2010, 06:01:19 UTC
You're more than welcome hun! ^^

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rumenes October 6 2010, 06:20:01 UTC
OMG this was just plain hilarious. I was expecting some angst at first, but it all turned out to be quite comical! :D My favourite was Junsu's signature butt moves and Jae's comment on Yunho's moobies! So freaking awesome that I laughed like mad! More please? :D

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fruityfruitcake October 6 2010, 21:25:45 UTC
Lol at first I had to check if I did put angst in the genre label of this fic. I didn't so phew. XD Humor is mah middle name. :DD LOLOL I'm glad it was enjoyable for you! Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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