Strawberry: Introduction

Jul 21, 2009 16:29

(A/N: My Bleach kick has waned, so updates will be sporadic, inspiration striking at very strange moments. Life's like that. I'm also working on getting my life ready to move to college, so that cuts into my time too. Thank you for being amazing readers.)

Introducing Strawberry, one of our lovely wait staff.
Rating: T

Hey, I’m Kurosaki Ichigo. No, it’s not written ‘strawberry...’ )

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kateison July 22 2009, 01:48:27 UTC
Oh wow, love this piece. I'm especially fond of the way you describe Ichi's relationship with his sisters, it's so very true to his character :))

The brick wall comparison made me laugh, how very true. And oh man, Renji and Shuuhei are so wonderfully oblivious <33

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fruitparlorcafe July 29 2009, 17:53:47 UTC
Hurray, I characterize well~ :3

I'm glad you like my story. Brick walls just struck me as a very Ichigo thing to say. And yes, they are delightfully oblivious. :D

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gypsygrrl420 July 22 2009, 02:39:29 UTC
Yay! Ichi is easy to write, isn't he? A lot easier than say Ishida, Byakuya, or Ulquiorra. I love how this flows so seamlessly, and how Ichigo has noticed that Renji and Shuuhei are both blind idiots (lolz, sorry, had to say it). I even like how he seems to like Grimmjow, which not many people do.

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fruitparlorcafe July 29 2009, 17:56:30 UTC
Yep. He was a nice change from I/B/U. And they *are* both blind idiots. xD

He likes Grimm. He can relate to Grimm on several fronts, most notable the protective-older-brother-front.

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gymnasticsbaby July 26 2009, 04:53:16 UTC
Aww ichi loves his sisters. Nicely done. You have a very good characterzation of ichigo kind without being sappy as well as strong without being a constant fighter. I like this little cafe a lot.

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fruitparlorcafe July 29 2009, 17:57:38 UTC
Thanks for the complements~ I'm glad you like my humble little offering. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

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