Comments | fruitparlorcafe: Sour Apple: Introduction

fruitparlorcafe

Sour Apple: Introduction

Jul 16, 2009 16:37

(A/N: WOW. I thought ISHIDA whooped my ass. Hello, Ulquiorra. He is damn hard to write. Aw, hell, and I still have Byakuya to do. I'm screwed. Sorry about the wait. Hope it's worth it.)

Introducing Sour Apple, one of our lovely wait staff.
Rating: T

( My name is Ulquiorra Schiffer... )

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Comments 4

gymnasticsbaby July 17 2009, 04:10:57 UTC

He's a peach isn't he? Actually I suppose he is a sour apple. The nickname fits well. I love the way you make him soundpolite and kind while not taking away that the entire thing sounds forced for him. Very nice characterzation.

fruitparlorcafe July 21 2009, 22:45:59 UTC

Peach? I'm not sure I follow your logic there. I'm trying to go by colors associated with the characters, or their names or identifying features. Or just fudging it completely. Ulquiorra has green eyes + antisocial "sour" disposition = sour apple. Dunno. I'm basically fudging my way through this entire story. I have no idea what's going to happen after Byakuya introduces himself.

Thanks for reading!

gymnasticsbaby July 23 2009, 08:52:23 UTC

By peach I mean in figuative speech.Where I am from when people say someone is a peach it usually means they are sweet like a peach.I used the expression sarcastically as in he is really not all that nice at all.I'm sorry if I confused you.

renkuroi August 7 2009, 17:25:01 UTC

LOL, I can imagine Grimmjow trying to pick a fight with Ulquiorra in a comical manner. Made me laugh.

I think, Ulquiorra, as the stoic one, would not very much say stuff about 'trashy' things.
So i hope to read more of him (?)