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froxyn

Fic: The Flight of the Lamborions (2/2)

Dec 29, 2010 08:54

( Part Two )

the flight of the lamborions, nc17, rose/ten, whofic, ficathon, frao

Comments 20

develish1 December 29 2010, 06:21:06 UTC

So....when it's my birthday....you're writing my Birthday fic right? Coz this is an awesome present fic, and I want one! *bounces up and down*

Seriously though love, I think this is utterly brilliant :)

froxyn December 29 2010, 20:52:01 UTC

*LOL* I can do that for you. :) Give me a couple of prompts of something you'd like to see and I'll see what I can come up with.

Thank you!!

develish1 December 29 2010, 21:26:19 UTC

I was only joking, but I guess I could come up with some prompts if you really fancy giving it a go. We've plenty of time, my B/D isn't till the end of March, or would you need that long? lol

froxyn December 30 2010, 21:14:03 UTC

*LOL* Probably not. But, I really would give it a go, if you want. :D

emraldeyedauter December 30 2010, 01:06:57 UTC

That was amazing and yes I sort of thought that they might forget about certain things. Very sad too in some ways but I guess that knowledge would certainly ruin the time they have left together. Its a beautiful story with lots of emotion and I do love your humour.

froxyn December 30 2010, 21:16:04 UTC

I wanted them to remember, I just didn't think it would be the best thing to let them remember. :(

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! *hugs*

julesndairyland December 30 2010, 02:59:41 UTC

I always love your Doctor & Rose but I found your Master entertaining as well...

Your hot sexiness is superb but I was intrigued by the Doctor's uncomfortableness with Rose kneeling in front of him. Great nod to the Doctor's innate sense of equality.

froxyn December 30 2010, 21:18:17 UTC

This was the first time I'd written the Master, so I was a bit apprehensive. But, then I remembered he's just basically a psychopathic smartass.

I'm sure he'll get over his uncomfortableness at some point. ;)

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

fenxflm December 30 2010, 18:47:07 UTC

*Grins* Yay new fic! great job.

froxyn December 30 2010, 21:19:41 UTC

Thank you! :D

beachy_geek December 30 2010, 19:57:26 UTC

Oh, this was deliciously hot and romantic and that tinge of menace from the Master was the icing on a very sweet cake. Their voices were perfectly in character and the imagery of the planet and the renewal/migration was so beautifully vivid. Just loved it, aside from severe Rose envy of course!

froxyn December 30 2010, 21:21:47 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm so happy that you liked it as much as you did. :)

I suffer from severe Rose envy as well. *LOL*