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froxyn

Hidden Truths (10/14)

Jun 09, 2009 05:10

Buffy and Dawn have a talk. Then there's dinner. Then...

This chapter is rated FRAO.

( Hidden Truths - Chapter Ten )

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froxyn June 9 2009, 19:39:54 UTC

*LOL*

Uh-huh...just a little!

dariclone June 8 2009, 23:33:59 UTC

Poor Dawn, lol! Excellent fic so far though.

froxyn June 9 2009, 19:40:13 UTC

:D Thank you!

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froxyn June 9 2009, 19:41:03 UTC

*snort*

No...she's not so bad...I still don't like her, but she was kinda needed in this one.

I'll take that blame with a huge smile!

boundbyash June 9 2009, 01:24:57 UTC

Oh god, poor Dawn. Now she'll need to be in therapy for life. lol. But it was so big of her to agree to move to
England for her sister and Giles. I really like the way you've written Dawn here - too often she comes off as simply a whining brat in fic, but you've brought her to life to well.

froxyn June 9 2009, 19:42:32 UTC

*ROTFL*

I mean, it wouldn't bother me...but...

Buffy's not my sister.

One of the main reasons that I rarely write Dawn is that she was a whining brat on the show...and she annoyed me. *LOL* But, I wanted to give it a go.

helgatwb June 9 2009, 02:38:49 UTC

Poor Dawn! I feel her pain! This was fantastic.

froxyn June 9 2009, 19:42:48 UTC

Thank you! :)