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froxyn

Dreamer (2/5)

Jan 18, 2009 07:26

Buffy and Giles have a talk with Lucas. Afterwards, Giles makes a disturbing discovery.

This chapter is rated FRT.

( Dreamer - Chapter Two )

dreamer, pg13, b/g fanfic, frt

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froxyn January 18 2009, 18:46:38 UTC

*LMAO* I know what you mean. Sometimes I'll start to write something and then think 'Oh, I can't do that in this story...Ethan's good!'

I'm glad you're liking it though!

antennapedia January 17 2009, 21:33:18 UTC

I love thickening plots. My favorite kind.

froxyn January 18 2009, 18:47:15 UTC

:D

Just a little thickened...

dariclone January 17 2009, 23:35:35 UTC

Aww, little Lucas being worried about Giles was so sad, but also cute.

froxyn January 18 2009, 18:47:49 UTC

Thank you. Lucas is a very sweet little boy. :)

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froxyn January 18 2009, 18:48:59 UTC

*LOL* I'm sure you'll regain your First Commenter status soon.

Memory loss can be a very scary thing...

okegirl January 18 2009, 03:19:16 UTC

Wonderful writing! Although I am worried by Giles memory loss, I hope it is nothing to serious. I am glad that Lucas shared his dreaming with Buffy and Giles, I just now realized that you still managed to name it after Lucas in a way, very nice. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.

p.s. In the line: " had successfully dispatched of a next of Rock Lobster demons " I think that next is supposed to be nest, and I am not clear as to whether dispatched is supposed to be disposed, or maybe it is supposed to be dispatched.

froxyn January 18 2009, 18:50:49 UTC

Thank you! I think Lucas realized that he had no other choice but to tell his parents. But, I'm glad that he did. :)

ps...thanks! It is supposed to be nest.