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[ multichapter ] The Devil's Trill I -- V [ Josh/Neku, TWEWY ]

Jun 28, 2010 14:34

Name: The Devil‘s Trill; I -- V
Author: frostberryjam
Rated: R
Series: The World Ends With You.
Pairing: Joshua/Neku
Word Count: 9,700.
Warnings: AU, adult/minor (22/16), swearing.
Summary: Neku is a high school student who has an unpolished talent for music but no drive and a distinct dissatisfaction with life. Kiryu ‘Joshua’ Yoshiya is the new teacher who has ( Read more... )

twewy; the devil's trill, the world ends with you: joshua/neku, rated: r

Comments 9

RSVP-ING hitori_kanane June 28 2010, 18:42:00 UTC

RSVP-ING FIRST SLOT TILL I FINISH SLEEPING. THAT IS ALL. PEACE.

Re: RSVP-ING hitori_kanane June 28 2010, 19:08:29 UTC

My eyes are dying and I'm barely awake but all I can say is JOSHUAAAA <333

Re: RSVP-ING frostberryjam June 28 2010, 19:16:26 UTC

Go to sleep, darling. /snuggle/

and Josh says 'it's Joshua-sensei to everyone but Neku. <3'

selenity136 June 29 2010, 02:04:09 UTC

Ah I'm so glad that this is back up now! I remembered vividly about the plot and re-reading it again makes me wish to see more of it :). Hehe, lovin' how this is going especially since I don't have any clue where this story is going at all.

frostberryjam June 29 2010, 15:52:55 UTC

Really? I always imagine the denouement is terribly obvious, but perhaps not. :) Hopefully I'll manage to get the next chapter written quickly!

(late cause i've had an excuse of a social life these last three days) azalee_calypso July 1 2010, 20:01:09 UTC

*happy sigh*

Dammit, this made me fall in love with music, pianos, Joshua, Neku-molesting, the music room and hands and wrists fetishism aaaaaaaaaall over agaaaaaaiiiin.
Though for some reason,
Neku could have kissed her for not being taken in by the slick charm, if he were interested in girls.
is still my favorite sentence, ever. I can't say exactly why.
All the scenes in the music room still have a dozen precious lines each, though.

*happy happy sigh*

Tyyyyypooooooos~~! dauphkantus July 19 2010, 18:24:39 UTC

digs through his boxers

although his remain on Neku.
huh?

It he really just does not care what it is they’re talking about,
also, huh?

So far it’s not much of a reaction, but Neku closes continues.
once more, huh?

Neku expels a noisy breath and stares down at the bowed head.
did i correct that right?

Re: Tyyyyypooooooos~~! frostberryjam July 19 2010, 18:31:56 UTC

Should be fixed.

Re: Tyyyyypooooooos~~! dauphkantus July 19 2010, 18:53:06 UTC

Yaaaaaaaayyy~~!

(I'm so tired~~ It's too damn hot and muggy here! I walked outside and my glasses fogged up for a few minutes! I felt lightheaded just from a quick walk down the block to a nearby building! So don't mind the now-brain-dead spazzing from my errand-walk-deaththroes plz)