Comments | frostberryjam: [ ficlet ] A Matter of Measure [ Turkey/Greece, Hetalia ]

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[ ficlet ] A Matter of Measure [ Turkey/Greece, Hetalia ]

Jun 26, 2010 21:53

Title: A Matter of Measure
Author: frostberryjam
Rated: G
Series: Hetalia.
Pairing: Turkey/Greece.
Warnings: Human names?
Summary: Turkey and Greece at the beach, still playing their game.
Author Notes: Written in half an hour, prompted by inuyashacooks.

( Therefore he flicks his ashes into the sand with a sardonic curl of his mouth that is only half-cruel and watches as the other nation makes a lazy, easy path back to the beach, not hurrying, letting the waves bat him about a little. )

hetalia: turkey/greece, type: ficlet, hetalia, rated: pg

Comments 12

irrationalsense June 27 2010, 02:25:48 UTC

...Turkey on the beach, sweat beading and dripping down sculpted muscles in the Mediterranean sun...

...Greece swimming...with mythological similes...

Obvious attraction and bitchery that will no doubt lead to either sex on the beach or Turkey's bungalow...

I WILL BE IN MY BUNK.

frostberryjam June 27 2010, 06:13:10 UTC

Or, you know. Sex in the ocean.

... yeah.

I'd join you in the bunk, but that might become awkward.

inuyashacooks June 27 2010, 02:52:38 UTC

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why does turkey/greece make me so excited

I LOVED THIS. just the imagery, and the writing itself...and the situations you write and the way you write them always bring out the characters so well (turkey sitting all surly on the beach, greece just off in his own world- and like all that stuff you sed about unconscious subconscious). omg, this just created such an awesome image. THANK YOU this was so awesome

frostberryjam June 27 2010, 06:14:32 UTC

It makes you excited because it is full of the epic win.

fo' sho.

Glad you liked it. <3 I was really pleasantly pleased to discover that Greece has all these islands that are pretty much just kissing the coastline of Turkey. So much fic fodder.

gothatheartholo June 27 2010, 02:57:38 UTC

*___*

This was very relaxing to read. X3 Thank you for sharing. <3

frostberryjam June 27 2010, 06:14:59 UTC

You're very welcome. ;D

themadhattertf June 27 2010, 13:28:53 UTC

What author said of her work is true: it is made of epic win. :)

I loved the metaphors and similes. I especially commend you on the last part of the fic.

Yes, four kilometres is a fic fodder. :)

frostberryjam June 28 2010, 15:15:29 UTC

Thank you. ;D That's very kind, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

SO much fic fodder. add in that some of the Greek beaches are for nudists and--

disownmereturns June 27 2010, 14:18:38 UTC

I love how you make small scenes like these so FFFFFFFFFing gorgeous when it's the two of them.