[ ficlet ] Loopholes [ Greece/Spain, Hetalia ]

[frostberryjam]

Title: Loopholes
Author: frostberryjam
Rating: PG-ish.
Pairing: Greece/Spain (Axis Powers Hetalia)
Warnings: AU, crappy writing. OOCness.
Summary: AU: Spain is the soccer coach. He may or may not have a thing for his star player.
Author Notes: Written for a commentfic meme, this time for peachmusk. Jesus Christ, little sister, I swear someday I’ll write a fic for you

Comments

[neocloud9]

Wait, where's the rest of it? XD

[frostberryjam]

In my heeeeeead.

where the bad porn belongs.

boom chika bow wow.

[neocloud9]

Come out, bad porn! Come out!

[onionheeeeeeead]

please get it out of your head :D
I love love love this pairing

[allalabeth_san]

*I'm going to end without OMFG tonight*

God, I loved this too. The little mentions to the other characters won my heart (Greece and Antonio were something I was expecting to love). Seriously loved this (even if, you know, I wouldn't say no to watch Greece touching Spain lol). So much that I'm going to add it to my memories like the previous one lol.

Someone should do a doujinshi with this plot. Pretty art is the only thing that could make it better.

[frostberryjam]

Mmn. I'd kill for some Greece/Spain doujinshi. haha, I need to stop loving such nonexistent couples. So agreed!

...I'm touched by the fact that people aren't going WTF is wrong w/you @ Greece/Spain.

maybe I'll be able to convert others to this paiiiriiiinngg. and it won't be so nonexistent!

♥

[allalabeth_san]

Obviously, nonexistent couples are nonexistent until someone decides to convert people. You, of course, have carte blanche to do it. Expand the fandom!!

Why would people go WTF with Greece/Spain? They're both happy, cheerful, mediterranean, hot and even have that thing in which Spain was the shopkeeper and Greece the buyer.

I'll kill for good doujinshi with Spain and without Romano xD

What? I'm not butting into a convo uninvited.

[fushigimaii]

Oh. Yes!

I'd totally make this a doujin if I could draw well enough already.
But, sadly, it is not my time.
Actually. I wanna draw it anyway

[suxing]

SCREAMS.

SCREAMS SOME MORE.

AHHHHH, OH MY GODDDDD. Dios mio, poor Spain. Or should I say, lucky Spain? \o\ Seriously though, Greece should come onto Spain more often because oooh, the way the power balance shifts just kills me. Seriously. As much as I love Teacher/Student relationships where the teacher shows the student the ropes, I probably love the round-about (with the experienced!student coming onto the the morally-conflicted!teacher) 100x more.

Just. Wow. Also, you, madame, are a tease. WHERE'S THE REST OF IT?? T_T

[frostberryjam]

The rest of it.. is in my head? rofl. I don't know, I kind of felt this was my weakest of the commentfics but I guess the Greece/Spain is just way too hot to ignore.

It's lucky Spain. Trust me, seriously sexy and lucky Spain. And lucky Greece too, y'know. ;D Normally I go more for teacher x student but it really felt better to do Student x Teacher here. I mean, Greece is just so... you know. Utterly confident of himself, he doesn't care if he's seducing someone older and in power.

and can I just say Spain's probably fantasized about the shower BJ thing way too many times?

[disownmereturns]

Hnng. It's like one delicious page out of a BL manga~ ♥

[frostberryjam]

That... is kind of the second comparison this has gotten. Hah? Well, I'll certainly admit to reading enough BL manga that I'm surprised I don't dream in manga or something. ;D

I would totally read this manga if it existed. Yes indeed-y.

[youkofujima]

Hmm, that's strange; I keep scrolling and all I see are people's comments. Something is wrong with your LJ, the rest of the fic is not loading.

[frostberryjam]

Clever. :P

the boom chika boom is staying in my head. You already got your porn!

[youkofujima]

I'm seriously. *clicks refresh* You better fix that.

Or I guess what happens is that...this is a common LJ thing?

So common that...porn that I post might just not fully load.

[frostberryjam]

P-porn?

....

what kind of porn?